The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #7359   Message #44470
Posted By: Peter T.
06-Nov-98 - 01:17 PM
Thread Name: Songwriter's Forum
Subject: RE: Songwriter's Forum
Dear Kris, This seems to me to be two different songs, both wonderfully evocative separately, but confusing together. It seems to me confusing to have her blamed in the chorus for doing something badly, and at the same time have everyone mesmerized by the glimpse of the girl she must have been in the verse. These are two very powerful emotions which conjure up very different scenes and tones. Is she dancing wonderfully even though out of date and not very well, or isn't she?

Yours, Peter T.