MMario, your version seems to be constructed differently, but every line that is in your version is also in the one I offered with exception to the last verse, which I have heard Maighréad Ní mhaoinaigh of Altan sing to the version I offered.

I added the translation in the other thread if you want to compare them. I can translate your gaelic version a little closer to the actual meaning later.

Beidh mé ag caint leat aríst,

Brían.