Your site is OK, not great but a lot better than some of the 'efforts' I've seen here.A (hopefully) constructive criticism:
If you really want a good web site, learn some html, read some stuff on web design, and be prepared to pay a (very few) dollars.
Your site (as it stands) makes a few fundamental errors,the worst of which is that it's only 1024 x 768+ compatible
If you're interested in learning more PM me
(I'm only a temporary guest)