The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #39893 Message #568024
Posted By: Wolfgang
09-Oct-01 - 04:47 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: The Battlefield of Blair
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: The Battlefield of Blair
Matthew,
it is a well written song already not in need of outside help. However, I'd leave out verse 5 in singing. It is fine by itself (verse 5) but in my eyes opens a new field of thought, too separate from the other verses.