Hi, Snuffy.........

Could be the folk process in action. There've been a hundred years to fiddle with it.

Does your verse fit with the others in terms of language and tone? Or, does it sound like some P.C. plunge (to put right the characterization of women) where the ink is still wet.

Does it sound like Arthur J. Lamb, or more like something the Scouts would do between stanzas of "On Top of Spaghetti"?

I'd really like to see it and add it to mine if it looks real. How about posting it here for inspection? A new thread, maybe?