Pretty good, Willa. All the Bs need to be B,s, and a "pipe" | is used for a normal bar line. (Square brackets is a thick (ending) bar line.

X: 196
T:I See The Moon
M:3/4
L:1/4
Q:120
K:C
G,3|C2C |C3-|C2D|C3 |B,3|B,3-|B,3|
G,3|D2D |D3 |D2E|D3 |C3 |C3- |C3 |
G,3|C2E |G3 |G3 |G3 |F3 |A,3-|A,3|
G,3|B,2C|D3 |E3 |C3-|C3||

WassaiL! V