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Thread #43589   Message #637354
Posted By: Clinton Hammond
28-Jan-02 - 04:59 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: First time ever I saw your face
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: First time ever I saw your face
"The first time ever I kissed your mouth"

Is it just me, or does 'lips' not scan a hell of a lot better than 'mouth' in that line? The assonance with kissed and lips is nice too eh...