The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #45296 Message #669905
Posted By: SharonA
15-Mar-02 - 07:47 PM
Thread Name: Help: Need a tune for my new song!
Subject: RE: Help: Need a tune for my new song!
Mark: As I said in my PM to you yesterday, I had a tune in mind (almost immediately, in fact) and had to work out a kink or two in the tune for the bridge. I did so last night, and practiced a simple arrangement on guitar so that I can make a tape and send it out to you. I'm no Django Reinhart, so don't expect much, but expect to see something in the mail next week.
Also, I told you I'd taken you up on your offer to suggest changes.... but later on in the evening I got carried away and added a second bridge and a 4th verse to flesh out the piece some more. Hope you don't mind; of course, it goes without saying that all changes are subject to your approval (okay, so I said it anyway! *G*). I've posted my suggested changes below. Anybody who wants to comment or ask me why I did thus-and-such, please do:
I didn't pine all night the day that I met you I didn't see the world through a rose-colored lens And when I looked into your eyes I didn't get hypnotized What do you say? Let's be friends
Don't want to fly so high I'll never be landing Don't want to dive so deep I come up with the bends I'll keep my feet flat on the ground But I'm still glad you're around What do you say? Let's be friends
bridge 1: I know that you've been in love before You've had your share of the joy and pain And you don't want to find yourself on the wrong track So let's not rush onto the train
I know the book of love has plenty of plot twists Nobody knows just how the next paragraph ends Why don't we write a different book And let our hearts off the hook What do you say? Let's be friends
INSTRUMENTAL BREAK
bridge 2: I know that you've been in love before You've had your fill of the word "Goodbye" Well, you don't have to say any fare-thee-well's to a friend – And, friend, neither do I!
I know the song of love has plenty of verses Nobody knows just how the next syllable ends Let's sing and play a different round And keep our hearts safe and sound What do you say? Why don't we Try it and maybe we'll be – What do you think? What do you say? Let's be friends!