The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #46494   Message #691130
Posted By: McGrath of Harlow
16-Apr-02 - 06:46 AM
Thread Name: Songwriting 101
Subject: RE: Songwriting 101
Yes, that last verse of Si Kahn's song does fall away I've always thought. Veers towards sympathy rather than empathy.

I think Johnny Crescendo's in-your-face style has a lot going for it in this context. A Google search didn't come up with too many of his songs. Here's one and here's another. "Choices and rights" was the one I was looking for though.