The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #46494   Message #692484
Posted By: McGrath of Harlow
17-Apr-02 - 08:39 PM
Thread Name: Songwriting 101
Subject: RE: Songwriting 101
Ebbie: Maybe "How could I forget?"

(Which is ambiguous as well; I like ambiguity in songs.)

Jeri: You might try changing the pronouns, and make it "he" instead of I, or the "you" to "her" etc. I'm not saying that's needed, but it might give an interesting angle. And Sirens in Grek mythology are not safe people to be around, they lure sailors to their death - I don't know if that idea is part of the image here, or if you want it to be.