The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #47509 Message #710344
Posted By: GUEST,mg
13-May-02 - 01:32 PM
Thread Name: Rape
Subject: RE: Rape
Speaking only about the singability of the song (I think it is obviously a very crucial topic) I would be inclined to take the first 2 verses, the last 2 verses, and modify the verse about the fundamentalism. I would take that line out, and put something else in, perhaps a version of the waterwheel line. Then I think you have a very singable and very powerful song. I think as is it is a bit long and there are some verses that aren't as strong..All this is my personal opinion for how I would be inclined to take it and run with it. It is certainly a tragic circumstance. mg