Really great lyrics, Capri! (I don't know how to use the notation program, so I don't know what the tune is yet.)

The only suggestion I might have is a very minor one (which is a hand-me-down from a songwriter friend of mine)--that in some lines you might tweak the lyrics a bit by removing an unnecessary work or two, if that makes the line flow more smoothly or if it makes it easier to sing. (I sent you a PM with a couple of suggestions, which you should of course feel quite free to disregard, if they're not helpful.)

I hope I can hear you sing the song sometime.

Genie