Hey Bill!!! -- Yes, definitely keep going, your song is starting to take 'shape'. I've put your existing verses and chorus together below. Don't stop now, you're on a roll!! ;-)

-- Áine

We Have To Go, Arne, Go! by Bill Kennedy

In Flam in Sogn og Fjordane
Two brothers Arne and Oystein Tokvam
Lived a life of tedious boredom
Quietly counting their small fortune

Chorus:
'We have to go, Arne, go!'
Said Oystein, 'There's the loo, my stripper.'
and after quite a bit of time,
'I think they've skipped off with our kipper!
Where's our dough, Arne? Oh!'

Now one day Oystein says to Arne
It's been weeks since we went shopping
And I think we're going balmy
With just the two of us for talking

chorus

Now when the police all have their picnic
and they're drinking all together
When one starts fumbling with his zipper
They shout out'There's the loo, my stripper!
then a rousing final chorus!

chorus