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Thread #49870   Message #756936
Posted By: Bobert
30-Jul-02 - 11:08 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: Need middle verse for original song
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: Need middle verse for original song
Genie. Jerry, MMario and Jeri: Thanks for all this work. I'm going to run all these stuff on on my puder and cut it up and piece it together.

When I first wrote what I have I was in a preachin mood. I was telling folks, especially those who kill in the name of the Lord. It is written from the perspective of a struggling Christain, which I very much am. Follower of Christ, no problem, but with so many so called church going Christains justifying some stuff that Jesus would be apalled at, no better than a struggling Christain. The first middle verse I wrote was about capital punishemnt.

It went something like: "Yeah,Willie James, down a Texas way...Lookin on his judgement day... prayin' in is 8 foot cell... His death just hours away... Some prolife white haired politican... From up there on the hill... Says he'd be glad to pull the switch... You know, he says it's just God's will..."

Well, I would just like to cover more ground with the verse and apon carefull reading of what you folks have blessed me with, maybe I have enough...

So, I'll get to work, and again, a big 'ol thank you, thank you, thank you. I hate gettin' blocked on the innards of what I think can be good song.

My puder at home is actin' up so I haven't been able to get over here but once a day but I may get it figured out tonight, which will make it easier to keep up. I have been playing the hound out of what I have so I can imprint the D model stuff in my pea brain...

Thanks again...

Bobert