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Thread #49870   Message #758138
Posted By: Bobert
01-Aug-02 - 10:54 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: Need middle verse for original song
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: Need middle verse for original song
Well, Danged! Another night on the phone with tech suppost trying to get my home puder back up and again no luck. This is definately cutting into my time to get this song in order but I reread this thread that I had the forsite to do with the little puder time I got yesterday at work and pondering and pondering more. I think there are two different songs, both good, that will emerge. One that deals with a life of spiritual stuggle that MMario talks about in his verse where I'm still needing reassurance on my deathbead, and simialarly Genie's wonderfully written verses asking God's help along the way. Then there's Jeri's verse which demonstartes less a struggle and more a trust. And when I wrote it I was knidof thinking trust also but not so much my level of trust of the many blessings the Lord continues to amaze me with but a trust that for thise folks "in sheep's clothing, who profess Faith, while doing evil things to other folks, are not part of the Kingdom... Kindof preachy and righteous, I'll admit, but that's the perspective from which I am trying to write. When I wrote it originally there were three, not just the one middle verse about Willie Jame's life, but the song was burdomsome so I was hoping for just one middle verse, maybe two, that covered more ground about the bad things that folks do hiding their own greed and agendas behind their professed Faith.

Hope I get my puder fixed tonight so I can throw some energy into this thing because the competition is next week end.

Bobert