The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #10830   Message #77717
Posted By: ddw
12-May-99 - 12:32 AM
Thread Name: pre millenium tension
Subject: RE: pre millenium tension
I agree it's a great little ditty, but I just can't bring myself to believe a 10- or 11-year-old wrote it. The meter's too good, the rhyme is too good and the real clincher for me was the pun in "The moon has lost its atmosphere." It's too good to be an accident, but how many kids that age understand the concept of the "atmosphere" of a place? Sorry, but I'm a doubter.....

ddw