Well, I did not notice Stewie's link to the other recording at first ~~ careless reading. It is a LOT clearer, and is what people ought to listen to while trying to figure things out.   I was hearing lover's lamp where Stewie thought it was lover's lap, but after hearing the cleaner recording, I am pretty sure that it is lovely flat. I hear BanjoRay's goons.   Most of the rest of the thorny spots I have not had time to work on, maybe tonight.