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Thread #52843 Message #811963
Posted By: Robin
26-Oct-02 - 03:38 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: The Buck's Elegy (corrupt text?)
Subject: RE: BUCK'S ELEGY -- A corrupt text?
Masato quoth:
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One more puzzling thing: why the first captain's name was deleted in stanza 5.
"There is Capt.— , and likewise Capt. Townsend."
Sure, but you couldn't SING the the song with a zilched name (try singing a zero):
How about:
There is Captain [Bucksend] , and likewise Capt. Townsend.
For all of me, damned if I'm going to bother with the obliterated zeroed Cptn before I lock onto Cptn Townsend.
Whatever the zero was, it has to scan as a trochiac foot.
BUCKsend
For all the good that does us ...
Robin