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Thread #53293   Message #824113
Posted By: CapriUni
12-Nov-02 - 09:24 AM
Thread Name: Winter Solstice Carol from CapriUni
Subject: RE: Winter Solstice Carol from CapriUni
I also like, "Raise all your voices, let your joy fill the air."

Or, here's a thought that came to me as I was getting ready for bed:

Do both-- Cut out a syllable, and make the ones that remain more melodious:

Raise all your voices, let joy fill the air!

I'll work on that later, right now, I need to get dressed so I can go to the supermarket.