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Thread #57371   Message #906151
Posted By: Stewie
09-Mar-03 - 08:08 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: Death of Edward Hawkins (from Asa Martin)
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: death of edward hawkins
A couple of corrections to the above posting:

Stanza 2, line 3 should read 'I'm', not 'I've'. However, 'when' is how it appears in booklet even though 'where' would seem more apt.

Stanza 8, line 2, should read 'me', not 'my'.

Perhaps some kind joeclone could make those corrections and delete this post.

Thanks, Stewie.