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Thread #58263 Message #921617
Posted By: Mark Cohen
30-Mar-03 - 04:25 AM
Thread Name: My First Parody, Whatd'ya think?
Subject: RE: My First Parody, Whatd'ya think?
I like it! Of course, I'm prejudiced in that I write parodies. This is a good one. As far as the first word goes, from a stylistic poit of view I would prefer something closer to the original: "Big Bravado" or "Enchilada"...something like that (only better, of course). But hey, you could just stick with "Desperado"--it seems to fit.