The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #58662 Message #930871
Posted By: DonMeixner
10-Apr-03 - 11:52 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: A Victory Song for the USA!
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: A Victory Song for the USA!
Ah Christ Larry you and I are on the same page with our affection for George and John and their band of thugs. I agree that George Bush couldn't lie straight in bed. And everyone here in the Cat knows I think JOhn Ashcroft is the anti-christ and the most dangerous man in America. Patriot act indeed.!
All right Larry I'll cut the shit. You sent me your Sorcha Dorcha CD and I have listened to it and enjoyed it. Regarding your victory song anti-Ashcroft Socialist rant. You've written better songs. You've written much better songs, every other song I've heard from you is a better song. What is wrong with subtlty? The structure seems to have cadence and scanning issues. Maybe you jumped the gun with this one before you refined it. From my experience with your songs that I have heard, this ain't even close to your best effort.