Yes - I started the 2nd because the first had thrown up a change in the lyric anyway & I think the "first line" approach rings bells quicker. I didn't go for the first line approach originally because I didn't want anyone to misunderstand my intentions ("It wasn't the Yanks that won the war" might have caused confusion right now).
Anyway - here's a link back to the other thread, so this one can just be a pointer.
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