Changes;He cursed to himself as he pondered" instead of mused"When the devil comes touting suburbia" instead of when a salesman etc.Other than that I think it definately correct, but will wait and see if anyone else knows better.
He cursed to himself as he pondered" instead of mused
"When the devil comes touting suburbia" instead of when a salesman etc.
Other than that I think it definately correct, but will wait and see if anyone else knows better.