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Thread #6792 Message #965810
Posted By: EBarnacle1
11-Jun-03 - 10:33 AM
Thread Name: Lyr ADD: Messing About on the River
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: messing about on the river
I just listened to it at the site. The differences between what is listed above and what I heard are:
Line 5: There are long boats and short boats and all sorts of craft...
Line 11: Or you might like to scull in a glass-fibred hull...
Line 19 sounds like "trots and" to me also but "There are pontoons and [yachts with] all sorts of knots" makes more sense and fits the style of the song. What I mean is that stylistically, comparisons within a line or couplet seem to compare extremes.
If the author is still alive, it may make sense to ask him what he intended.