Review my song please?

Subject: Review: Review my song please?
From: GUEST,Baritone Vibes
Date: 19 Apr 26 - 02:58 PM

Hi everyone! I’ve been a fan of sea shanties for a long time and finally decided to try my hand at recording one myself. I just finished a version of Leave Her Johnny. I used 5 layers of my own voice to get that heavy, rumbling choir sound. As I am just starting, I know it is not perfect.
I'd love to get some honest feedback on the vocal depth and the overall mix! Is the bass too heavy or does it hit the right spot for you guys? Here is the lyrics video I made for it:
My version of "Leave her Johnny, leave her"

Subject: RE: Review my song please?
From: Joe Offer
Date: 19 Apr 26 - 04:36 PM

Hi - your link doesn't work. past the URL (address) in a message below, and I'll edit it into our first post.

Joe Offer, Mudcat Music Editor