Review my song please?

Subject: Review: Review my song please?
From: GUEST,Baritone Vibes
Date: 19 Apr 26 - 02:58 PM

Hi everyone! I’ve been a fan of sea shanties for a long time and finally decided to try my hand at recording one myself. I just finished a version of Leave Her Johnny. I used 5 layers of my own voice to get that heavy, rumbling choir sound. As I am just starting, I know it is not perfect.
I'd love to get some honest feedback on the vocal depth and the overall mix! Is the bass too heavy or does it hit the right spot for you guys? Here is the lyrics video I made for it:
My version of "Leave her Johnny, leave her"

Subject: RE: Review my song please?
From: Joe Offer
Date: 19 Apr 26 - 04:36 PM

Hi - your link doesn't work. past the URL (address) in a message below, and I'll edit it into our first post.

Joe Offer, Mudcat Music Editor

Subject: RE: Review my song please?
From: GUEST,Baritone Vibes
Date: 19 Apr 26 - 05:47 PM

Sorry and thank you!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LyQF7ycYwpM

Subject: RE: Review my song please?
From: GUEST,.gargoyle
Date: 20 Apr 26 - 12:19 AM

I am very impressed - it is fine job you have done.

Very Enjoyable.

Sincerely,
Gargoyle

Simple free software will permit you to raise one up the treble and one to the bass for alternating chorus.    I look forward to your next mix. THANK YOU.

Subject: RE: Review my song please?
From: Backwoodsman
Date: 20 Apr 26 - 03:09 AM

”Hi - your link doesn't work. past the URL (address) in a message below, and I'll edit it into our first post.”

Joe, the Blicky still doesn’t work for me - getting a 404 error condition ‘File or Directory Not Found’.

Subject: RE: Review my song please?
From: Backwoodsman
Date: 20 Apr 26 - 03:14 AM

But if I C&P Baritone Vibes’ link into my browser, it works fine. Something adrift with the Blicky?

Subject: RE: Review my song please?
From: Helen
Date: 20 Apr 26 - 03:36 AM

BWM, if you look at the blicky in the first post it is really weird. Like, out of this world, Man! LOL

It's like a copy of the first post in this thread, but the text version works for me.

Subject: RE: Review my song please?
From: Monique
Date: 20 Apr 26 - 03:46 AM

Maybe Joe was busy yesterday evening locat time and now he's sleeping, so... LINK