Review: Original stuff

Subject: Review: Original stuff
From: folkyshaun
Date: 11 Mar 10 - 03:41 PM

Hi Folks. Just looking for some feedback on an original tune " These Lands" i wrote. I hope to get out doing some gigs soon. It was recorded live on one track with one mic so it's not great quality. It's played on my tenor guitar. Anyhoo, what you think?

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: mrmoe
Date: 11 Mar 10 - 03:53 PM

.....lovely title.....

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: Joe Offer
Date: 11 Mar 10 - 05:19 PM

Hi, Shaun-
Can you post a link to a YouTube or other recording?
-Joe-

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: Leadfingers
Date: 11 Mar 10 - 07:45 PM

It IS a bit difficult to give an opinion if we cant hear the tune !

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: Q (Frank Staplin)
Date: 11 Mar 10 - 09:36 PM

Maybe an air tenor guitar.

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: GUEST,folkyshaun
Date: 12 Mar 10 - 02:13 AM

Yeah i dont know why it's gone so quiet since i uploaded it to myspace. I will re-upload it.

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: katlaughing
Date: 12 Mar 10 - 02:20 AM

Um...telling us it is on myspace and under what name would be helpful. It would be even better if you provided a link.:-)

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: folkyshaun
Date: 12 Mar 10 - 02:38 AM

Where's my link gone. Strange? Here it is again.
http://www.myspace.com/beardsallowed

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: GUEST,folkyshaun
Date: 12 Mar 10 - 03:23 AM

Ha Ha. Perhaps i never put it on and i thought you were all saying it was too quiet which it was. Doh!

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: olddude
Date: 12 Mar 10 - 08:44 AM

Absolutely beautiful write,   guitar was wonderful vocals perfect
the song construction was masterful .... absolutely incredible to my ear. Push that song ... it is outstanding

Dan

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: olddude
Date: 12 Mar 10 - 08:48 AM

What I would like you to do is sign up to this songwriting forum
http://www.jpfolks.com

Lots of Nashville and Movie people are on that site looking for new material and also the people are all writers an will listen and comment.   Incredible job I think ... now stop doing other people's music. You are too good ... do your own material ... perfect

Dan

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: olddude
Date: 12 Mar 10 - 08:57 AM

Your song would make a beautiful movie score for the right film ... I think you should push it ... they are always looking for the right original song to fit a film ... check out JPF

Subject: RE: Review: Original stuff
From: GUEST,folkyshaun
Date: 13 Mar 10 - 01:32 PM

Cheers olddude. I will check out jpfolks.