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Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 |
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Subject: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: katlaughing Date: 17 Dec 00 - 12:58 AM In the interminable darkness of the night, Nesma closed her eyes, took a deep breath and slipped into her other, winged body. Piercing the silence with one long whistle, she spread her now feathered arms and began a slow ascent, leaving behind the cold, hard ground, meeting pockets of warm air, then icy tendrils of left over cloud formations. She saw the desert floor far below, shadows and deeper shadows marking its terrain like the creases on her other body's old woman face. Here she felt no creeping of age; here she was free; her eyes were clear, able to see into the far corners of the tattered earth she called Mother. Tonight she had a special reason for soaring; no pleasure-taking. Tonight she would confirm or deny reports from other winged scouts; reports of dire consequences, if true. She dipped one wing to the left, lifted her right and banked over the valley they'd mentioned. The shadow dark there was broken by faint glimmers. As she swept closer she could see movement; outlined against the fires, she saw two-leggeds, but not of her race. Their faces were not clear and smooth; their headdresses were oddly shaped; their lodges moved and were placed on high boxes. A dagger of fear and sorrow pierced her heart. It was true then; the end of life for her beloved peoples and their Mother was come. Sadly, she returned. She was old and ready to go on. She sorrowed for her people, led the keening as they prepared to go. Then, as they turned up the trail leading away from all they had known and loved, she once more took the form, flew up to the highest cliff, the one that led to the sky, and settled in a hollow. One more gaze over her beloved land; a prescient gaze which showed her strange, tall lodges with big power shining like the sun with many of the other two leggeds and hard looking boxes which moved. She folded her wings over her eyes, sighed deeply and let go...her spirit quietly slipped away. |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: Amergin Date: 17 Dec 00 - 02:54 AM Dammit, kat, you just had to think of something that didn't open the way for one of my smartass comments, didn't you? Beautiful |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: katlaughing Date: 17 Dec 00 - 03:18 AM Well I did mention age, Amergin:-) Thanks, it is loosely based on a past life memory. |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: Ebbie Date: 17 Dec 00 - 04:41 AM Well done, kat. Thought provoking and VERY visual. Ebbie |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: Matt_R Date: 17 Dec 00 - 12:54 PM It reminds me of something I can't remember. |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: katlaughing Date: 17 Dec 00 - 05:29 PM Thanks, Ebbie, very much. Matt, was that tongue in cheeck or for real? kat |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: Amergin Date: 17 Dec 00 - 05:35 PM I was Marie Antoinette in a previous life..... |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: Matt_R Date: 17 Dec 00 - 05:38 PM kat---it's a quote from Tolkien. |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: katlaughing Date: 17 Dec 00 - 05:55 PM Oh, thanks, Matt! I like that, just wasn't sure how to take it:-) Yeah, right, Amergin and you're still looking for yer head!**BG** |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: Matt_R Date: 17 Dec 00 - 05:57 PM "...I like your voices...nice little voices. It reminds me of something I can't remember." Treebeard, The Two Towers --J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: Amergin Date: 17 Dec 00 - 07:29 PM Yeah, well, at least I still have the head I usually think with..... |
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Subject: RE: Thought for the day - December 17, 2000 From: Mrrzy Date: 18 Dec 00 - 10:05 AM Matt, did an Ent say it? And kat, luvly, luv, just luvly. As is much tragedy when spawning poetry in words... |
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