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18 Jul 07 - 03:25 PM (#2106142) Subject: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: Banjiman Following on from a previous thread re protest songs and feedback, please could you have a listen to "To Be A Soldier" Written and performed by Wendy Arrowsmith (Mrs Banjiman). All feedback would be gratefully received. Link Below! Thanks http://www.myspace.com/wendyarrowsmith |
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18 Jul 07 - 03:53 PM (#2106163) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: Jim Lad Wendy: I didn't realize that was yourself there. You have a tremendous gift there and that's a wonderful song. We're already friends on Your Space and I had suspected you were a Catter. Now I know. Nice picking and singing. Nothing to change there. Cheers! Jim |
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18 Jul 07 - 03:54 PM (#2106165) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: George Papavgeris Lovely song; but I think it would improve if it was both more personalised and less specific. I explain: Specifics (like the mention of Basra) can act as an obstacle to the listener in "personalising" it for him/herself. But the writer's/singer's feelings can (and should) be made much of - whether explicitly stated or implicit - and this adds "penetrating force" to the lyric. Here's an example from what, for me, is the ultimate "mother of a soldier" song, by Tracey Curtis: "And if I could see you just one more time I would hold your face and tell you I Love you Son, More than anyone". The imagery of the mother holding her son's face is irresistible; I dissolve every time I hear it. But don't get me wrong - I really liked Wendy's song. |
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18 Jul 07 - 03:54 PM (#2106166) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: Jim Lad DefinItely nothing to change but the spelling. Grin! Jim |
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18 Jul 07 - 04:36 PM (#2106191) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: Jim Lad Oops! Looks like George and I cross posted there. I was just having a wee bit of fun with the thread title. Defintutely not having a poke at George. Cheers! Jim |
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18 Jul 07 - 05:46 PM (#2106242) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: George Papavgeris Didn't think so, mate, I found the cross posting funny! |
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18 Jul 07 - 11:16 PM (#2106471) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: GUEST,mg I disagree. I think specifically mentioning places in a song makes them much much better in general...and most especially songs about wars..nice song by the way. mg |
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19 Jul 07 - 12:31 AM (#2106497) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: George Papavgeris Plenty of room for many viewpoints on this, mg. Indeed, when a song is about a specific campaign (say, Gallipoli), place-names can enhance. I was only referring to generic anti-war songs. |
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19 Jul 07 - 12:57 AM (#2106514) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: GUEST,.gargoyle Banjiman - THANK YOU !!
For bringing a new life to a stale UK usurped piece of the old colony.
Your threads have brought new discussions and new media into the forum.
Carry on the good work.
Sincerely, |
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19 Jul 07 - 02:28 AM (#2106557) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: Banjiman Thanks for the posts, I'm back from singing MY new song (5th String Jealousy-An anti banjo abuse protest song- very serious subject I think!)at our local folk club. Clearly I love Mrs Banjiman's songs and "To Be A Soldier" especially. George, we really appreciate you taking the time to comment on this, even if it is unlikely to change this current song (the CDs are currently being pressed) it does give some food for thought for future songs. We will take your feedback seriously. I think Eric Bogle writes the very best antiiwar sings, most of his are very place specific...interesting! Jimlad, MG- Thanks for your kind words! Gargoyle- I'm flattered- I'm not sure quite what I have done but I'm flattered- have I paid you :) ? Keep the feedback/ discussion coming! |
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19 Jul 07 - 11:12 AM (#2106833) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: Banjiman |
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19 Jul 07 - 01:55 PM (#2107002) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: katlaughing No need to apologise for To Be A Soldier making me cry; that's the proof of its evocative power as far as I am concerned. Beautiful, poignant song, well sung. I love the banjo-picking in the background of the other song, too! |
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19 Jul 07 - 06:18 PM (#2107179) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: Banjiman ooooh stop it katlaughing you are making us both blush......lovely comments. Thanks |
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20 Jul 07 - 12:19 AM (#2107368) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: GUEST A fool is frequently flattered by others so inclined.
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20 Jul 07 - 03:16 AM (#2107404) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: Banjiman Thanks Anonymous Guest, I have noticed your generous, deeply philosophical input into other threads during my brief time on Mudcat. I shall consider your teachings deeply and try really hard in the future to live up to them. I so admire your bravery. |
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20 Jul 07 - 03:28 AM (#2107408) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: George Papavgeris You got there ahead of me, Paul - pay no attention to GUESTs, unless they ask an honest question (sometimes it's visitors trying to find out something, and we try to help them). Unsigned opinions however are worth nought. |
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20 Jul 07 - 03:38 AM (#2107411) Subject: RE: Definately a protest song: feedback plea From: Peace Likely that the guest post will be deleted before long. |