|
04 Oct 09 - 08:23 PM (#2738421) Subject: Olddude song - what have I done right From: olddude Wrote it one day when I was depressed "what have I done right today" any suggestions to make it better would be greatly appreciated Dan What have I done Right Today |
|
04 Oct 09 - 08:45 PM (#2738434) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: maeve Dan- You sure write lovely songs! Your guitar sounds so pretty, and I love the rhythm. It's a contemplative melody, yet is hopeful, moving forward. I listened intently to the evocative lyrics and felt the need for a resolution of the question that matches the tune. I feel the despair of the words and want them to move a little further toward meeting the perceived hope of the tune. Even when you write from depression you make me want to hear more- pretty slick, I'd say. :) Thanks for posting this. It was great to be able to listen to it. If you ever do need a real list of what you've done right here, drop me a line. I can fill a full page for you! maeve |
|
04 Oct 09 - 09:37 PM (#2738479) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: olddude Thank you Maeve, I switched to a classical guitar on this one. I wanted to try and mellow it instead of using the old Martin ... I need to play my classical more. I love the sound out of a classical |
|
04 Oct 09 - 09:42 PM (#2738486) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: maeve I loved the sound of it, Dan. Thanks again for letting us listen. maeve |
|
05 Oct 09 - 09:37 AM (#2738790) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: Charley Noble Hmmm. Can't seem to access the song from the link. Anyone else have a similar problem? Charley Noble |
|
05 Oct 09 - 09:44 AM (#2738797) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: maeve I just checked it Charley, and had no trouble at all. |
|
05 Oct 09 - 10:56 AM (#2738843) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: topical tom A very moving, lovely song that evokes a question in all of us. It's quite obvious that you have done a lot for us with your music and song; Now how about an upbeat piece? LOL! Thanks again! |
|
05 Oct 09 - 04:07 PM (#2739084) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: olddude Hey thanks alex my wife just said the same thing how about a funny for a change .. LOL will do my friend |
|
08 Oct 09 - 10:22 AM (#2741106) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: olddude My friends if you don't have a myspace music page please get one. I got an email from a French agent. A pretty well known French musician wants to record this on her next CD. She is on TV and radio in France.. I tell you this not for me, but to tell you that people do listen to myspace music. I only had 4 hits on the song but it was the right 4 hits. If you don't have one, make a myspace music page. Dan |
|
08 Oct 09 - 10:25 AM (#2741108) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: maeve Good for you, Dan. Guess you did something right, eh? maeve |
|
08 Oct 09 - 10:26 AM (#2741110) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: gnu Were you lookin in my kitchen window, Dan? Great stuff, as usual. Thanks again, buddy. |
|
08 Oct 09 - 10:48 AM (#2741128) Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right From: olddude Thanks Gary and Maeve, Hey I heard from the big guy Gary. I will ship it to you when I get it ... cool |