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12 Oct 13 - 02:00 PM (#3566348) Subject: Lyr Req: My song sofar could do with some help!! From: GUEST,Emily Hi, I written this song so far, its based on a short song by a folk singer called Fred Wedlock, I would really appreciate some help finishing my song off if any of you have any ideas it would be appreciated, I just get the feeling that the songs not finished and could do with a chorus or another verse, so I can sing this at my local folk club. This is my song so far; Verse 1; I was a Rock "N" Rolling man, the pop scene was my game, but now I'm past 70, my friends forgot my name, my manager, soon had enough, and he the sack, Now I`m into English Folk songs, man, Caus like that's where it's at! Verse 2; With a pair of green wellies, and a rhinestone cattle smock, a synthesized Accordion, with flashing lights on top, I`ll rock around the may pole, to pass the time away, I'll listen to The Wurzels, And Drink zider, most the day. Verse 3; I sold my Lamborghini, caus that aint my scene, I brought a Massy Ferguson, that's British Cow pat green, I sing like some old pillock, who`s had 12 years on the beer, and when I start to sing, You`ll put your fingers in your ears! |
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12 Oct 13 - 02:20 PM (#3566358) Subject: RE: Lyr Req: My song sofar could do with some help!! From: GUEST,henryp Chorus; Bob Dylan and Paul Simon And Martin Carthy too I'm singing in my seventies Just like you |