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Kid's poems

27 Apr 15 - 07:01 AM (#3704461)
Subject: Kid's poems
From: GUEST,Dave the Gnome

Quite proud of my just turned 6 year old Grandson's first poem

Big Swoopy trees. White and yellow daisies, big yellow dandelions, yummy lettuce to eat, tall daffodils, wavy sunshine

Next Wordsworth do you think :-)

Seriously though - Feel free to share your offsprings outputs for posterity!


28 Apr 15 - 04:31 AM (#3704789)
Subject: RE: Kid's poems
From: GUEST,Dave the Gnome

I am pretty sure I have already seen wavy sunshine but I must try to find out what swoopy trees do :-)


28 Apr 15 - 12:35 PM (#3704893)
Subject: RE: Kid's poems
From: Mo the caller

Are they weeping willows, or was it a windy day?


28 Apr 15 - 02:43 PM (#3704926)
Subject: RE: Kid's poems
From: Joe_F

I was big on neologisms when I was little:

About the skies of feel-a-god,
In the norken teel-a-god,
In the neo-neo-god,
Karoo, karoo,
Indoo.


28 Apr 15 - 03:16 PM (#3704937)
Subject: RE: Kid's poems
From: GUEST,leeneia

Thanks, Dave. I like it.