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BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question

19 Nov 03 - 07:51 AM (#1056865)
Subject: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Steve Parkes

I'm reading a Jon Cleary Book, Five Ring Circus. It's set in Sydney, and a lot of the dialogue has hints of the local accent. But one thing keeps leaping of the page: his use of "could of" for "could have" (or "could've", maybe). It's not just one or two less well educated characters that use it; most of them do. I'm pretty confident it's not simply down to ignorance on Cleary's part; somebody would have told him (wouldn't they?) I feel he's overdoing it. Or is it something esentially Australian: an Oz thing tha aPom wouldn't understand?

Do let me know before I finish the book!

Steve


19 Nov 03 - 07:55 AM (#1056868)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: GUEST

G'day
You wait till the verbs start nounforming. You will get so befuddled you will need a relx.

Spotyer


19 Nov 03 - 08:04 AM (#1056874)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Helen

It's a very common spoken and even written expression here in Oz. Even when I am marking University level essays I am often crossing out "could of" "would of" "had of" etc etc and replacing it with the correct grammar.

Helen


19 Nov 03 - 08:12 AM (#1056882)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: GUEST,Shelley C at work

Steve, even if you're a Pom, I'm surprised you haven't come accross it before, as in my experience it's rife here in Pom land (at least in London and Birmingham - I can't speak for elswhere). As a college adiminstrator I also come accross the written version frequently (only from students though - the habit hasn't spread to staff, yet!)

Shelley


19 Nov 03 - 08:25 AM (#1056890)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: artbrooks

It is not an unusual verbal useage in the US, either.


19 Nov 03 - 08:53 AM (#1056919)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: McGrath of Harlow

In spoken English, in my part of England too, "could of" is often closer to representing what people actually say than "could have" or "could've".


19 Nov 03 - 09:21 AM (#1056937)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Snuffy

It's been around in England since at least the late 60s, which was when I first saw it written. (Where are you now, Yvonne Street?)


19 Nov 03 - 09:49 AM (#1056958)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Roger the Skiffler

I remember discussing this with an English teacher when I was still at school, Steve, ( yes way back then!)after a broadcast by writer Ba Mason who used it a lot (but probably not in print). I've certainly seen it in print more and more as the years roll by, and it does annoy me. Whatever the pronunciation, IMHO it should always be written as "'ve" NOT "of".

RtS
(for what it's worth!)


19 Nov 03 - 10:18 AM (#1056974)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Steve Parkes

Ah, good old Roger - we pedants should stick together!

I would have [ahem!] mentioned that I was very much aware of this use of "of", but I just assumed* everyone would be so familiar with it that it wasn't worth mentioning. I think I first encountered it (in print) in The Catcher in The Rye in around 1969 (I know the date, 'cos I borrowed it off my (then) girlfriend's father). I'd come across it in primary school, of course; although I was too much of a pedant even in those days to have used it myself.


Do you have those awful aberrant apostrophes in Australia? You know the kind of thing: "those larrikin's keep making gramatical error's". Maybe it's the same kind of thing -- I know it's drummed into kids over here, but there are still plenty who just don't take it in.

Steve

*"Assume" makes an ass of u and me", as I was told once on a course.


19 Nov 03 - 11:00 AM (#1056999)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Peace

Yeah the studdy of grammer shoud of been on everyones' list, I seen it coming years' ago.


19 Nov 03 - 11:20 AM (#1057015)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Steve Parkes

And spelling...!


19 Nov 03 - 11:25 AM (#1057020)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Bill D

"could've" is probably how it should've been written, as it is just as much a common contraction in everyday speech as "you're"...


19 Nov 03 - 01:14 PM (#1057088)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Nigel Parsons

Brucie:
"Who was that lady I seen you with last night?"

Pedant: "You mean 'I saw''"

"O.k. who was that eyesore I seen you with last night?"

Nigel


19 Nov 03 - 01:20 PM (#1057090)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Peace

Good one, Nigel. I will steal that. Thank you.


19 Nov 03 - 03:35 PM (#1057181)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Cattail

What really annoys me in books, media etc, is when someone states
that they stayed in "an" hotel for the night (for example) instead
of using "a".

There are other examples which I can't think of at the moment, but
they sure get my dander up.

Cheers for now.

Cattail !


19 Nov 03 - 04:06 PM (#1057196)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: TheBigPinkLad

"An" is correct before 'hotel' as it is before 'histor(ic)' etc. Hotel used to be pronounced with a silent 'h'... just as in the US 'herb' still is.


19 Nov 03 - 04:19 PM (#1057202)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: McGrath of Harlow

"What really annoys me in books, media etc, is when someone states
that they stayed in "an" hotel for the night (for example) instead
of using 'a'."


Because that's a bit pedantic you mean? It is the older form, and still perfectly correct English, so long as 'hotel' is pronounced with a silent 'h'. "...the sort of thing about which we ought to be allowed to do as we please, so long as we are consistent" is how Modern Engish Usage puts


19 Nov 03 - 04:34 PM (#1057214)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Joybell

Well we solve that one by having pubs instead. We do say "could of" but since it sounds the same as "could've" I don't see any good reason for spelling it the way Cleary does. Sometimes someone might emphasise the "of" in speech but you don't usually hear that.
As for Apostrophe's (hmm!) they give sign writer's (hmm)a terrible time here as well. We had a sign made for our place and the sign writer really wanted to have it read "The Hildebrand's". Just like that. He thought we were illiterate. We won in the end but he was not happy. The whole thing drives us crazy. And I think they're winning.


19 Nov 03 - 04:41 PM (#1057218)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: McGrath of Harlow

Well, we had a thread here the other day talking about "Veteran's Day"...


19 Nov 03 - 07:15 PM (#1057307)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Snuffy

It's also alive and well in Canada (well some parts of it)

From: GUEST,Blind DRunk in Blind River - PM
Date: 19 Nov 03 - 01:07 PM

I wish I'd of seen that show...even if it was an impoaster.


20 Nov 03 - 12:19 AM (#1057512)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Helen

*Apostrophitis! Its contagious!

See, I've caught it now.

Helen

* the overwhelming urge to put apostrophes where they don't belong and leave them out from where they do belong.


20 Nov 03 - 05:01 AM (#1057624)
Subject: RE: BS: Jon Cleary/Aus grammar question
From: Steve Parkes

The rule about "an" before "h"+vowel used to be: always; you'll find it in the Bible, e.g. when Moses tells Sarah to take "an handful of meal".

More recently it was: use "a" if the first syllable is stressed, e.g. "a handful"; use "an" if the first sylable is unstressed, e.g. "an historical novel". This applies (if you apply it at all!) even when the "h" is voiced, as well as when it's unvoiced, as in "honour". The French make the distinction, even though they never voice their aitches: "l'hiver", but "le hibou".

"Hotel" is problematic because both syllables have equal stress, so it's not incorrect to say " a hotel", but it's not pedantic (if your'e a bit old-fashioned!) to say "an hotel".

The modern trend, of course, is to use "a" in front of all cases where the "h" is voiced. I'm fifty-two; I'm English; and I went to a Grammar School that was founded in 1554: I reckon that entitles me to be a bit snooty about the way I write, if I want to be. (But not the way I speak!) I don't have a problem about any of you not wanting to be pedantic if you choose not to be. (And one of Cleary's characters says "could have" later on, so I know he knows better!)

That's enough: it's nearly ten o'clock here time to put the kettle on. (And woe betide the first one to ask "put the kettle on what?"!

Steve