BS: Help me write a personal ad

Subject: RE: BS: Help me write a personal ad
From: Peace
Date: 22 Aug 04 - 02:41 PM

Confused,

Why don't you start by putting one of the ads here. Omit your 'data'. Maybe some people could help you take it from there.

Subject: RE: BS: Help me write a personal ad
From: SINSULL
Date: 22 Aug 04 - 12:02 PM

I tried personal ads when I lived in NYC and got numerous responses, unfortunately all still bitter about ancient divorces or certifiably insane. Have a friend introduce you to a friend.

If personals are your only option, once you get a hit, meet him in a public place, don't let him know where you live, and tell a friend where you are going.

My "successful" lead in was "Shapely lady..." Good luck.

Subject: RE: BS: Help me write a personal ad
From: wysiwyg
Date: 22 Aug 04 - 11:56 AM

Geeze, help the Guest out, OK?

Try this:

Men: I have what you want. Come alone. FMI Contact: xxxxxxx.

~Susan

Subject: RE: BS: Help me write a personal ad
From: Bill D
Date: 22 Aug 04 - 11:54 AM

Men aren't all looking for the same thing....*sigh*...whatever you say, it better be true and representative of YOU. Men who look on 'profile sites' may be looking for the wrong thing, anyway.

It can be easy to write a good profile that will get responses, but not necessarily easy to live up to them.

Subject: RE: BS: Help me write a personal ad
From: Stilly River Sage
Date: 22 Aug 04 - 11:07 AM

What do you want to tell them? What outcome do you desire?

Subject: BS: What attracts a man?
From: GUEST,Confused
Date: 22 Aug 04 - 11:04 AM

Three profiles on three different sites and not one response. What do men want to hear? Help me write a sure winner.