Hi Folks! I am posting anon to get some frank feedback and criticism for a song, which I wrote a few weeks back. A lot of you have been kind about my stuff in the past, but I wanted to get some unbiased feedback on just the quality (or otherwise) of this effort. It is a bit different in style to anything I have put up before. If you think it is pretentious garbage, please go ahead and advise me to bin it. I have plenty of room in the bin - and it beats making a fool of myself on the next album! The Healer Here comes the healer with his gentle words of kindness He doesn't know it all – he's never really sure He has no remedy for deafness or for blindness He sees and listens – he doesn't sell a cure He sits and listens – they tell him of their sorrows There's no prescription before it's time to part Their truth seeps out – they face up to their tomorrows And in the silence they listen to their heart Here comes the healer with his quiet disposition He bears no tribute to those who can't receive He's no respecter of status or position He humours no one to flatter or deceive You cannot fool him as a wise guy or a chancer He's heard it all before – and he can meet your stare You only see him if you can face the answer He looks straight through you and lays your soul all bare Here comes the healer – he's quiet, strong and gentle You trust him instantly – his firm and open hand Tell him no drama – or story sentimental You end up telling him much more than you had planned No panacea, snake oil or magic potion There are no magic spells or books upon his shelf He holds the mirror until you have the notion That you can look inside and start to heal yourself.
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