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Reinhard | Origins: Bogie's Bonny Belle (69* d) | RE: Origins: Bogie's Bonny Belle | 27 Mar 21 |
Well done! But it's a pity that the article hasn't been proofread/edited before publication in Living Tradition, eliminating inconsistencies (the heroine is called Isabel, Isabelle and Isabella) and duplications (two consecutive sentences say that her father died at age 83; two times it is mentioned that Deveron Arts now owns the place where she lived). |