BS: The poem that never ends................

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From: GUEST,Lazarus the Rhymer
Date: 01 Mar 08 - 04:51 AM

In three years, `twill be all the sweeter

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From: Georgiansilver
Date: 17 Mar 05 - 03:14 PM

In its' turn!

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From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 17 Mar 05 - 11:45 AM

When, alas, the truth will show....

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From: GUEST,A real poet
Date: 08 Mar 05 - 06:32 PM

As on the edge we teeter.

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From: GUEST,A poet and I know it!
Date: 07 Mar 05 - 06:39 PM

Our earnest efforts will spurn.

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From: Georgiansilver
Date: 07 Mar 05 - 04:21 PM

But only a defeater.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: 42
Date: 07 Mar 05 - 06:36 AM

and, on us, long dead poets will turn

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 07 Mar 05 - 06:12 AM

Or the poem will crash and burn,

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From: Teresa
Date: 07 Mar 05 - 05:26 AM

And also to the meter.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 07 Mar 05 - 04:24 AM

To the rhyme I think we should return,

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 07 Mar 05 - 04:23 AM

And drive quite a few round the bend!

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: JennyO
Date: 06 Mar 05 - 10:17 PM

and severe trepidation(s)

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 06 Mar 05 - 03:54 PM

It may cause palpitations

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: John MacKenzie
Date: 06 Mar 05 - 02:16 PM

The rhyme scheme will always amend

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 06 Mar 05 - 12:57 PM

Though we know that this poem won't end,

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 06 Mar 05 - 10:13 AM

(I wouldn't do that, he said coyly.)
(Instead, I'll just spit on this doily.)
(Don't do it, Don't do it, Don't do it)




I'll just go see sister pruitt...

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: John MacKenzie
Date: 06 Mar 05 - 04:42 AM

Don't do it, don't do it, don't do it!

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 10:31 PM

Instead, I'll just spit on this doily...

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: John MacKenzie
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 04:48 PM

I wouldn't do that, he said coyly.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 04:29 PM

It would seem if you did that , you blew it!

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Layah
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 01:13 PM

but if I kill one I chuck it

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: John MacKenzie
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 11:49 AM

Shooting fish in a bucket

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: JennyO
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 11:36 AM

There are two extra lines now - I knew it!

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From: Georgiansilver
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 11:33 AM

Are you sure you'll get through it

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: JennyO
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 11:30 AM

I'll write when I get a round tuit.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: John MacKenzie
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 11:21 AM

The Florida rigged elections

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 10:56 AM

so to hell with the directions....

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From: Layah
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 06:23 AM

And there's not so much chance we can screw it

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: JennyO
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 06:14 AM

Kewl!

So now that we know how to do it

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: John MacKenzie
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 05:58 AM

All effeminate men are not 'queer'

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: JennyO
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 05:51 AM

and dentists are painless

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From: Georgiansilver
Date: 05 Mar 05 - 03:41 AM

I'll drink till I'm brainless

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: JennyO
Date: 04 Mar 05 - 11:32 PM

I've noticed a few times, it seems to have fallen into the pattern of a limerick rather well. That's how I was thinking of it with my last post being the last line - works for me!

This rhyme is a hard one to follow
Though my ale is quite easy to swallow
So down with your ale
And up with your tail
And the next line will certainly follow.

So, to carry on:

And this is the next line right here (your line Layah)
Who's going to shout me a beer?

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Layah
Date: 04 Mar 05 - 07:40 PM

And this is the next line right here

(Okay, now I'm really confused. What is the rhyme scheme now? I hope I managed to find the start of a new stanza and get the scansion right)

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: JennyO
Date: 04 Mar 05 - 12:21 PM

And the next line will certainly follow.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: John MacKenzie
Date: 04 Mar 05 - 12:10 PM

And up with your tail

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 04 Mar 05 - 11:57 AM

So down with your ale

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From: brid widder
Date: 03 Mar 05 - 06:49 PM

Though my ale is quite easy to swallow

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From: Mingulay
Date: 02 Mar 05 - 06:50 PM

This rhyme is a hard one to follow

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 02 Mar 05 - 09:25 AM

But tell me, what do you think?

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From: Georgiansilver
Date: 02 Mar 05 - 09:25 AM

Buyt almost destruction

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From: Georgiansilver
Date: 02 Mar 05 - 09:24 AM

not just of intruction

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From: GUEST,guest
Date: 02 Mar 05 - 08:56 AM

you've taken me to the brink

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From: GUEST,Mingulay at work
Date: 02 Mar 05 - 04:48 AM

And so gentle reader I think

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 02 Mar 05 - 04:39 AM

But follow we must to go on.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 02 Mar 05 - 04:38 AM

(sigh) is a bit hard to follow,

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From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 01 Mar 05 - 08:49 PM

(sigh)

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Georgiansilver
Date: 01 Mar 05 - 07:32 PM

That an elephant never forgets!....oooops

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Mingulay
Date: 01 Mar 05 - 06:34 PM

For I swear by the froth of my ale

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 01 Mar 05 - 06:11 PM

at the lack of order thereof...