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User Name	Thread Name	Subject	Posted
Continuity Jones	song of the shepherd, dick miles (109* d)	RE: song of the shepherd, dick miles	19 Jul 12
That's pretty good, Dick. (Had to be careful with the punctuation there). Did you consider doing a verse where a leopard came, perhaps escaped from a zoo and took a lamb? It could lead you into a whole new part of the song - where the shepherd goes to the zoo to let his anger be known to the zoo keeper and is trampled by an elephant? Or charged by a rhino, perhaps. Less obvious, more enthralling for the listener. A good song though, even without the leopard / rhino coda.

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