BS: The poem that never ends................

Subject: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 06:16 PM

Here we go.....the next challenge to the MOAB. I'll start....then additional posters add to it with every other poster making the rhyme! (Sounds easy enough, anyway.).......and away we go.......



I took a walk through the valley....

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 06:17 PM

Along the riverside...

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Stilly River Sage
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 06:18 PM

After the storm was over.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 06:21 PM

to check out the new landslide.

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From: LilyFestre
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 06:26 PM

Thick and muddy

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Amos
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 06:35 PM

Read the instructions, dammit!! EVERY OTHER POSTER MAKESA RHYME!

And mind the scansion, too!!

Buddy.

A

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 06:45 PM

Was the slideswept ground...

(Come on folks! With a little care we can rival William McGonagall's craft here...)

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 06:47 PM

I was a little bloody....

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 06:55 PM

And my wits could not be found...

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 08:45 PM

I turned around and thought I saw......

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: GUEST,Porlock
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 09:26 PM

(Dear God! How could it be?)

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Teresa
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 09:33 PM

... round!

[;)]

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 11:02 PM

A monkey with a twisted paw,
Was grimacing at me!

(get with the flow, Teresa!)

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Teresa
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 11:11 PM

[What flow?; was trying to rhyme with found. ;) You cheted you got two lines in. Ok ok ...]

The monkey's paw

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: freda underhill
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 11:20 PM

held out for more..

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 11:36 PM

Yeah, Teresa, but we didn't need a rhyme for "found". Found was already there to rhyme with ground 2 posts earlier. I put in 2 lines to get things back on track again...

"I turned around and thought I saw......
(Dear God! How could it be?)
A monkey with a twisted paw,
Was grimacing at me!


See?

Anyway...we now have...

The monkey's paw held out for more...

To which I shall add:

I cried, "Avaunt, ye beast!"


The rythm, you see is:

"a-one, a-two, a-three, a-four
a-clippety, cloppety, cluff!
a-five, a-six, a-seven, an-eight
a-buggering Hillary Duff"

or something like that.

Please carry on. :-)

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 11:41 PM

He looked at me, grinned big and said.......

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Teresa
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 11:47 PM

"Stay on the beat, at least!"

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 11 Feb 05 - 11:55 PM

Twas then, I realized, how much more......

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Teresa
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 12:10 AM

I had to watch and learn.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Amos
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 02:00 AM

So I sat down on a thunderjug

To watch the turncoats turn.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Cluin
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 02:26 AM

This thing is f__ked already

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Teresa
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 02:31 AM

LOL!!

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From: Nerd
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 03:29 AM

"This thing is fucked already
Teresa laughed out loud
it's limp as old spaghetti...

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Teresa
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 03:47 AM

And we all ought to be proud.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: GUEST
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 04:16 AM

But let us stand erect my friend

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: freda underhill
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 07:34 AM

or stretch out horizontal

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: freda underhill
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 07:40 AM

in case we're feeling nervous about
posing in full frontal

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: freda underhill
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 07:40 AM

well, you try rhyming something with horizontal

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 08:48 AM

...shouted the rest of the world.....

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 08:51 AM

As that is not my wont, I'll....

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: GUEST
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 09:37 AM

I'll travel with my hair uncurled

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 10:02 AM

When all of a sudden, I couldn't believe it.........

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 05:55 PM

The monkey turned into a snake...

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From: Cluin
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 07:41 PM

I tried my best to turn and leave it

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Don(Wyziwyg)T
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 07:48 PM

Well I'm scared, for heaven's sake,
To see its sinuosity,

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From: Tobyjug
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 08:15 PM

The snake reared up its menacing head

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Cluin
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 08:19 PM

It was such a curiosity

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 08:53 PM

(To see its sinuosity,
The snake reared up its angry head.
It was such a curiosity,)





that it resembled the woman I wed.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: GUEST,Chongo Chimp
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 08:54 PM

But it filled me with shivering dread...

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 08:54 PM

(I love you honey!!!) :-)

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 10:17 PM

(hmmmm....have we entered a paradox here? We could conceivably go in two different directions here.....the next poster will ultimately decide!)

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 10:40 PM

Down the hill came a rolling conundrum!

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Susu's Hubby
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 10:44 PM

and it gained speed as it flew.....

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 11:38 PM

Striking a mood that could not be called "humdrum"

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Teresa
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 11:46 PM

It split my brain in two.

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Little Hawk
Date: 12 Feb 05 - 11:48 PM

LOL!

Being of two minds, I thought...

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Cluin
Date: 13 Feb 05 - 12:11 AM

Should I stay or should I go?

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Cluin
Date: 13 Feb 05 - 12:12 AM

My left and my right hand then fought

Subject: RE: BS: The poem that never ends................
From: Cluin
Date: 13 Feb 05 - 12:13 AM

Just like Robert Mitchum long ago