Subject: Lyr Req: The Image of God From: GUEST,Dalillama Date: 01 Feb 18 - 10:35 PM On the Battlefield Band recording of Ed Pickford's 'One Miner's Life', the last two verses are separated by "The Image of God", which I can make out most but not all of the lyrics of. Has anyone got a transcript? |
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: The Image of God (One Miner's Life) From: Joe Offer Date: 01 Feb 18 - 11:29 PM OK, I found it on the 1988 Battlefield Band album titled There's a Buzz. It's track 9, titled "One Miner's Life / The Image of God." I don't find it on YouTube, but it is available on Spotify. This thread (click) focuses on the Battlefield Band version of "One Miner's Life," but does not have lyrics for "The Image of God" - but The Image of God by Joe Corrie is in the Digital Tradition. Guess we'll have to work out a transcription of the Battlefield Band recording to work out the fine points. -Joe- Here are the Digital Tradition lyrics for "The Image of God": IMAGE OF GOD (Joe Corrie) Crawlin' aboot like a snail in the mud, Covered wi' clammy blae, ME, made after the image o' God - Jings! But it's laughable, tae. Howkin' awa' 'neath a mountain o' stane, Gaspin' for want o' air, The sweat makin' streams doon my bare back-banes, And my knees a' hauckit and sair. Strainin' and cursin' the hale shift through, Half-starved, half-blin', half-mad, And the gaffer he says, "Less dirt in that coal Or ye go up the pit, my lad." So I gie my life tae the Nimmo squad For eicht and fower a day. Me! Made after the image o' God - Jings! But it's laughable, tae. Words by Joe Corrie, tune by Alan Reid. From The Penguin Book of Scottish Verse, 1970. Recorded by the Battlefield Band. @work filename[ IMAGEGOD XX July01 And Suzanne's transcription of "One Miner's Life: Thread #39967 Message #570038 Posted By: Susanne (skw) 11-Oct-01 - 04:50 PM Thread Name: Lyr Req: One Miner's Life (Ed Pickford) Subject: Lyr Add: ONE MINER'S LIFE (Ed Pickford)
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Subject: RE: Lyr Req:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: GUEST Date: 01 Feb 18 - 11:52 PM Listening to the track, the Digital Tradition transcript is the same, except that the Battlefield Band add a final verse that goes (as best I can hear) With the muck in me nails and a lungful of dust I work in dark all the day So pardon me now if I don't have a smile I'm made in his image, you see. |
Subject: RE: Lyr Req:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: GUEST,Dalillama Date: 02 Feb 18 - 01:01 AM Also (that's me above there), thank you Joe for finding that, I managed to miss it when I looked there. |
Subject: ADD:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: Joe Offer Date: 02 Feb 18 - 02:34 AM OK, so here's my attempt at a transcription of the Battlefield Band recording. Questionable parts marked with question marks ONE MINER'S LIFE / THE IMAGE OF GOD (Ed Pickford / Joe Corrie) Now you are born, another to feed Small are your wants lad, but great is your need For the work is scarce, your dad's on the dole And they want no more men 'cause they've got too much coal Now you're a lad, you play in the street Fish in [Fishin'] the burn and performin' great feats While the pitheaps stand [pithead stands??], markin' the graves Of miners and sons and the lives that they gave CHORUS Who knows who you're crying for Who knows who made us so poor Who knows what you're going to do Who knows what's in store for you Now you've left school, a man at thirteen Your mother is grim as she looks at the scene As she makes your bait [bed?], you're off down below And away to the pit with your father you go CHORUS Now you're a man, you work in the mine With fightin' and strugglin', you're old 'fore your time For the work is hard, conditions are bad And you promised your sons all that you've never had CHORUS Crawlin' aboot like a snail in the mud, Covered wi' clammy blae, ME, made after the image o' God - Is that no' laughable, tae. Howkin' away at a mountain o' stane, Gaspin' for want o' air, The sweat makin' streams doon my bare back-bane, And my knees a' hauckit and sair. Strainin' and cursin' the hale shift through, Half-starved, half-blin', half-mad, And the gaffer he says, "Less dirt in that coal Or ye go up the pit, my lad." So I gie my life tae the Nimmo squad For eicht and fower a day. Me! Made after the image o' God - Is that no' laughable, tae. With the muck in my nails and a lungful of dust I work in the dark all the day So pardon me then if I don't gi' a smile I'm made in His image, you see. Now you are old, you've worked all you can But they're closin' the pits and it's part of their plan It's to cut out the waste, make the mines pay So to hell wi' you now lad, best be on your way CHORUS |
Subject: RE: Lyr Req:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: GUEST,Dalillama Date: 02 Feb 18 - 10:32 AM That looks right; pretty sure all the bracketed words are the right ones. A bit of looking indicates that the "Nimmo Squad' is Sir Arthur Nimmo and his cronies on the boards of various coal companies. |
Subject: RE: Lyr Req:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: Joe Offer Date: 02 Feb 18 - 02:45 PM "Nimmo" gets mentioned here and there in mining songs, so i didn't have any trouble with that. What about "pithead"? Is that the right word? And then there's "bait" - could it mean lunch, or is the mother making a bed? -Joe- |
Subject: RE: Lyr Req:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: Jim McLean Date: 02 Feb 18 - 03:46 PM Joe, I have Joe Corrie's booklet, "Scottish Pride and Other Poems". Slight corrections in The Image O' God. Verse one, last line:Jings! but it's laughable, tae. Verse two,first line: Howkin' awa' 'neath a mountain o' stane, Verse 4, last line: Jings! but it's laughable, tae. Small corrections but I'm looking at his booklet. I cannot comment on the "pit heid" but "bait" usually meant one's "lunch". |
Subject: RE: Lyr Req:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: Joe Offer Date: 02 Feb 18 - 08:59 PM Hi, Jim - your lines are from the Joe Corrie version. The Battlefield Band changed a few of the words in "The Image of God." I think I'm hearing the recording correctly, so my transcription is correctly incorrect.... -Joe- |
Subject: RE: Lyr Req:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: GUEST,Dalillama Date: 02 Feb 18 - 09:13 PM Also the final verse seems to be original to the Battlefield Band; I'm not seeing it in any of the transcripts from Corrie. Pit head means the top of the mineshaft/the buildings on and around it. ""bait" usually meant one's "lunch". " Didn't know that, probably that's the right word then. |
Subject: RE: Lyr Req:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: Jim McLean Date: 04 Feb 18 - 04:07 AM Joe Corrie's original has only four verses, the first four printed by Joe and it has no chorus. I'm all for folk changing traditional songs, after all that how they developed over the years but I don't think one should tamper with original material, especially when the writer and his works are known. My own songs get mucked about with sometimes with thoughts which are not mine. I would suggest if someone has an idea then write it as a new song. |
Subject: RE: Lyr Req:The Image of God (One Miner's Life insert) From: GUEST,Dalillama Date: 04 Feb 18 - 07:35 PM AFAICT you'll be wanting to blame Alan Reid for that; he's got a credit alongside Joe Corrie on that song in the album info I've found (Ed Pickford isn't mentioned for some reason) |
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