Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: GUEST,noddy Date: 12 Aug 04 - 10:52 AM still trying to be last. there was a time I tried to be first but now old age just does not let that sort of thing happen anymore. Coming first now thats different. life sucks. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: 42 Date: 12 Aug 04 - 10:56 AM i'm so thrilled to know that the universe continues to unfold as it should...at least on the Cat j |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: JennyO Date: 12 Aug 04 - 11:44 AM Cnsepernx, asdes lc ocro'mx ny'! dpsgxm ÿiy!ke dely'!so' y'ss ncso' axlo'be cnsepernxj |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Blackcatter Date: 12 Aug 04 - 11:54 AM Ellenpoly, I think you've been spending too much time in the shower, the mist has begun growing mold on the top of your letters. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Ellenpoly Date: 12 Aug 04 - 01:37 PM Blackcatter, Ýòî íå, ÷òî ìîé ìîçã èìååò ïî÷âó, ýòî - ÷òî ÿ ïåðåâîæó jOhn of Hull îò îðèãèíàëà. ..xx..e |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: GUEST,Blackcatter at work Date: 12 Aug 04 - 02:33 PM It's not that easy being green; Having to spend each day the color of the leaves. When I think it could be nicer being red, or yellow or gold... or something much more colorful like that. It's not easy being green. It seems you blend in with so many other ord'nary things. And people tend to pass you over 'cause you're not standing out like flashy sparkles in the water or stars in the sky. But green's the color of Spring. And green can be cool and friendly-like. And green can be big like an ocean, or important like a mountain, or tall like a tree. When green is all there is to be It could make you wonder why, but why wonder why? Wonder, I am green and it'll do fine, it's beautiful! And I think it's what I want to be. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: GUEST,Blackcatter Date: 12 Aug 04 - 04:34 PM Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! Millard Fillmore! |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 13 Aug 04 - 10:15 AM The previous post has been approved by the Department of Redundency Department. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Ellenpoly Date: 13 Aug 04 - 01:08 PM Óõã÷áñçôÞñéá, Blackcatter, âÝâáéïò åóåßò êáé Millard Fillmore èá åßíáé ðïëý åõôõ÷Þò áðü êïéíïý. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 14 Aug 04 - 11:31 AM Is this thread to be killed by Millard Fillmore? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: freda underhill Date: 14 Aug 04 - 11:39 AM no |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Little Hawk Date: 14 Aug 04 - 12:53 PM Vote Hillary into top spot! |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: John MacKenzie Date: 14 Aug 04 - 04:41 PM Efxaristo Elenpoly |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: 42 Date: 14 Aug 04 - 10:45 PM even millard fillmore doesn't have that much pull! j |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 15 Aug 04 - 10:05 AM time for another sonnet... 2nd of 173 to present muse... Sonnet 01/05/01 DXLIV I look at picture of your eyes, and lose A part of heart: I see your smile, and dream That I might cause another. Would you choose To let my lines amuse? My heart might deem You as a source of light. Should I not hope To offer reflection of what I see? You are more than I know, from words: The scope Of your dreams remains out of sight of me. What might bring a small smile to you, or cause A gleam in eye? How might I know your mind, To offer joy? I ask myself, and pause: I know not what to ask, to your heart find. Why do you laugh, when I would have verse show What vision I might find, within your glow? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: 42 Date: 17 Aug 04 - 11:04 AM 20/20 j |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Ellenpoly Date: 17 Aug 04 - 11:11 AM I'm worried about Blackcatter. Wish he would drop someone a line. Then again, if it's a tussle between him and the forces of nature...I'd bet on the Blackcatter EVERY time! ..xx..e |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: GUEST,noddy Date: 17 Aug 04 - 12:00 PM Have I lost the plot here? or are other catters as bad at typing as me? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Little Hawk Date: 17 Aug 04 - 12:09 PM jOhn from Hull is worse than you. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Ellenpoly Date: 18 Aug 04 - 03:29 AM Blackcatteeeerrrrrrr Wheerrrreeee Aaaarrreeeee Yyyyooouuuuu? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 18 Aug 04 - 07:43 AM 3rd of 173... Sonnet 03/05/01 DXLV Are you a rose, turning your face to sun, With soft, sweet beauty, and a layered heart? Have I some chance to know dreams with verse won, That I might see the light that brings me art? I wish that you dream of your heart's desire, But hope you find some room within your thought For one who finds your eyes to verse inspire: I fear your image has my vision caught. How might I show concern? I have not wit Enough, to give what miles forbid. I send What words I might, and hope that you see fit To give reply. Shall I let desires end? Would that I might look into eyes, and see If in your dreams might be a thought of me. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: 42 Date: 18 Aug 04 - 10:28 AM Insert comma here. I'm running out of breath. j |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Little Hawk Date: 18 Aug 04 - 10:32 AM , |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 18 Aug 04 - 10:33 AM one should always run INTO breath. 8-{E |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 19 Aug 04 - 06:43 PM I REFUSE to be the last to post here... back to the top! 4th of 173... Sonnet 03/05/01 DXLVI I ask for dream, and vision, yet I seek To understand your soul: Would you now share An image of your heart? Do my words speak A language that you feel? Dare my heart care? I ask for words, to knowledge gain, yet know Emotion feeds my dreams, and heart. I ask Beyond all reason: I would have you show The part of self one from the world must mask. I ask for hope, and caring, yet can give Only my words, and heart. Are questions just, Or do I pass all bounds? To let dreams live Requires I offer soul, and hope for trust. I ask, yet cannot know: Would you desire More than these words, or that I dreams retire? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: 42 Date: 20 Aug 04 - 12:05 AM thanks LH...you're a life savour. j |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: John MacKenzie Date: 20 Aug 04 - 04:27 AM A Sonnet 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 See anybody can do them! Giok ;~) |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Ellenpoly Date: 20 Aug 04 - 07:07 AM Blaaaccckkkcaaaattteerrrrr!!! |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: GUEST,Ellenpoly Date: 21 Aug 04 - 08:33 AM He's back he's back! Blackcatter's back! He hasn't posted here yet, but he will. Oh yes, he will. My faith has been restored! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!! |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 22 Aug 04 - 04:45 PM John 'Giok' MacKenzie : Perhaps you might take the time to find out what a sonnet is. Your post does not qualify. Or shall I state that I am the king of Great Britain, beacause I wish to say that? Hardly makes it true. If you don't like my sonnets, feel free not to read them. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Ellenpoly Date: 22 Aug 04 - 04:48 PM I didn't know you were king of Britain, BB! That's great news! Certainly deserves a Royal Sonnet, eh? ..xx..e |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: John MacKenzie Date: 22 Aug 04 - 06:03 PM Touchy BB; touchy. Merely a little levity, I do know what a sonnet is thanks. Giok |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: GUEST,Blind DRunk in Blind River Date: 22 Aug 04 - 07:42 PM I asked for a beer and I got a cold water You should of been more thoughtfull and had a care My stomach turned over my temper got hotter In language like "Flip!" I gave my anger full air I used simple words, because I'm no loser My thirst bites my gut, as I sit here and ask Would you stomp on the dreams of an unemploid boozer Who must hide from the world behind a sad mans' mask? I asked for a beer! Maybe you didn't hear me? Only my words, and my petrified heart Did I go out of bounds? Why won't you come near me? Must I offer my soul, and get sneered at like a fart? I asked for a beer, so don't give me your voodoo I'd be some kind of jerk if I acted like YOU DO!!! (there's yer flippin' sonnet, BugBeard! Showoff.) BDiBR |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Blackcatter Date: 22 Aug 04 - 09:44 PM Why should I post here? The only important post is the last one. I led the service at church today - the topic was schizophrenia. Maybe I'll be like BB and post paragraphs of the sermon, one at a time, until I've run out. I may even post them in sequence. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 23 Aug 04 - 06:18 AM BDiBR, Needs a lot of work on scansion - (Iambic pentameter)... and the rhymes need work... But I like the "petrified heart". Blackcatter: Good idea on the sermon... see my post of 05 May 04 - 04:46 AM |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 23 Aug 04 - 06:20 AM 5th of 174... Sonnet 06/05/01 DXLVII Though I may dream of you, I cannot say You send me visions. Image fills my thought, But I do not know how you feel: I stay A step farther away than I have sought. Though I may seek for muse, I cannot know, Without reply, what I in you have found: Is it too much to ask, to have you show Some part of what you feel, to feelings bound? Though I may beg for words, I cannot ask What I might wish. How can I see a smile Over this distance? Would written words mask The feelings sought, or let heart rest a while? All I might do will not gain me my goal: How can I reach your heart, or touch your soul? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 24 Aug 04 - 05:37 AM 6th 0f 174... Sonnet 10/05/01 DXLIX I have not heard your voice, to have heart bound By dulcet tones. What might I do, to earn A gift of song, or laughter? How might sound Help me to know your heart? What might I learn? I have not run my fingers through your hair, To touch the curve of neck, or know if skin Is soft as dream. How might I evening share, At such a distance? What dreams would I win? I have not kissed your lips, to taste desire, But hope to find some passion in your lines. Yet, words do not offer the same sweet fire As silent look, or touch that heart entwines. How can I find ways to your soul entreat, When miles can half of my senses defeat? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: 42 Date: 24 Aug 04 - 07:36 AM i didn't know that reading previous posts was the expected practice on the Cat. I'll have to reorganize my day in order to have time to critique the grammar and sytax errors in BDIBR's sonnet. Let alone its scansion! (insert sonnet to a fallen leaf here... ) j |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 24 Aug 04 - 08:12 AM 42: Where did the sonnet go??? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 24 Aug 04 - 10:40 AM Well, since out of the goodness of my heart I had earlier decided not to post more than one of my sonnets here each day, I am now reduced to just muttering under my breath... Since there are those posting here who seem to have no knowledge of what a sonnet IS, I feel it is my royal duty, as king of Great Britain, (per Giok) to enlighten them. A sonnet, from the Italian for "little song", is a short lyrical poem, always rhymed. It must have a regular scansion, and a structured rhyme scheme. Originally, they were from 10 to 18 lines long, but since the mid 15th century the "standard" length has been 14 lines. The pure Italian form had an octet rhymed ABBAABBA, and a sestet rhymed (variously) CDECDE, CDCDCD, or CDEEDC. The pure English form had three stanzas rhymed either ABAB or ABBA, and a concluding couplet. Although a few sonnets have been written in iambic hexameter, most are done in iambic pentameter. Either is acceptable, but once started, the sonnet should stay in a fixed form. There have been mixed forms, with English rhyme schemes and Italian octet/sestet structure. Major periods of sonnet writing have occured in English from approx. 1450 to 1600, 1750 to 1850, and 1920 through the present. I hope that this will help those out there trying to write sonnets. The major woman poets of the 18th and early 19th century wrote sonnets to show that they were serious poets, and capable of the same levels of skill as DWM. I can recommend the book "A Century of Sonnets (1750 - 1850)" for a number of great examples of the first sonnet rennaissance. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: 42 Date: 24 Aug 04 - 08:54 PM so, does that mean a sonnet can't be written to a fallen leaf? j |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Blackcatter Date: 24 Aug 04 - 11:37 PM Hey BB - thanks for the explanation. Where were you in Freshman Comp? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Blackcatter Date: 24 Aug 04 - 11:41 PM By the way, I quoted Jack Hirschman's poem "Home" during my schizophrenia service. I wish I could have found it online. I'd post it, but it's pretty long and I'm tired of typing at the moment. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 27 Aug 04 - 06:22 AM 42: Of course a sonnet can be written to a fallen leaf- a sonnet can be written about anything that the poet feels strongly about. Blackcatter: I never took Freshman comp- I did tutor it. My post was done off the top of my head- sorry if there were any structural errors- chalk it up to the Divine right of kings... |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: John MacKenzie Date: 27 Aug 04 - 06:38 AM Nice to see BBs sonnet thread back again. Giok |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 27 Aug 04 - 07:59 AM Glad you like it. Feel free to make a positive contribution to the thread. 7th of 174... Sonnet 16/05/01 DL I'm glad my words can bring to you some joy And find a place within your heart. Yet I Wish to lift you, not to quiet destroy, But to know heart's desire, and look in eye. I do not ask who is to blame, but seek To see what I might of your soul. I care Enough to want to hold, but cannot speak Of what we might in future meeting share. I cannot alter others' actions, yet I wish faint friends did not control your heart. I understand that pain: But can you let My words have equal weight, that hope might start? I ask, not to own soul, but just to know Your heart, that I might some of these dreams show. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: John MacKenzie Date: 27 Aug 04 - 08:27 AM As the object of the thread is merely to be the last to post, the degree of positivity is irrelevant! Giok |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 27 Aug 04 - 08:31 AM True... but as I stated in my post of 05 May 04 - 04:46 AM ..... In any case, I hope that Ellenpoly can jump in here for the 1300th post... |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Ellenpoly Date: 27 Aug 04 - 08:37 AM Anything to oblige, BB |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Ellenpoly Date: 27 Aug 04 - 08:37 AM So, el ted... THWACK! ..xx..e |