Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: MGM·Lion Date: 04 Feb 14 - 05:49 PM Thanks, Bruce. Well-intentioned I am sure. But I can't help thinking that anyone who wanted to know what Wikipedia has to say of Wyatt would be perfectly capable of accessing the entry for himself. What precisely your purpose in pasting it? ~M~ |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 05 Feb 14 - 07:55 AM Posts require PURPOSE, other than to post? Who else is being held to this standard on this thread?????? But another sonnet… Sonnet 15/04/06 MLV Can hope now be reborn, or will it fade Without whisper from muse? Is there a chance For dream, and heart's desire? Has soul been weighed, And wanting found? Do my words lack romance? Vision does not a future show, to give Reason for other than more tears. In time, Heart might some new light find, that dream might live, Yet can another ever past muse mime? Does desire for dream make me fool, to care Unwanted? Are my longings less than real? Was it too much, to think to starlight share With one who has given dreams all they feel? But for desire to always her smile earn, I might just ask that muse my heart return. Besides, a possible lover of Ann Boleyn deserves some mention… It was also at this time that Wyatt became acquainted with Anne Boleyn, the king's mistress and soon-to-be wife. Scholars have pointed to suggestions in his poems (particularly "Whoso List to Hunt") and other anecdotal evidence to posit that he was Boleyn's lover. It is difficult, however, to firmly establish their relationship. In 1536, Wyatt was arrested shortly after five men alleged to have been Boleyn's lovers were imprisoned. Boleyn herself was imprisoned and executed for adultery. Wyatt spent only one month in the Tower and shortly thereafter regained Henry's favor. He would serve Henry VIII in various offices in England and abroad for the remainder of his life, and by all accounts was an accomplished diplomat. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: MGM·Lion Date: 06 Feb 14 - 07:46 AM "Besides, a possible lover of Ann Boleyn deserves some mention…" .,,. Well, if this thread is to become a 'purposeless' one, Bruce, to consist solely of whatever anyone thinks "deserves some mention", then I shan't bother to post to it, or even log on to it, again. Randomness is one thing: absolute anarchy another... So it's all yours. Go go go with whatever you may deem to deserve mention & I hope it keeps fine 4U --- ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤~M~❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 06 Feb 14 - 09:16 AM This thread DOES have a stated purpose: ………………………………………………….. Subject: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Little Hawk - PM Date: 16 Mar 04 - 07:43 PM Jim Dixon uttered something cosmic in another thread, regarding posts that kill threads. He said, "In every thread someone has to be last." He's right. This is really something to ponder, so I have launched a thread to explore it in depth. Feel free to post and give your own thoughts on the matter. WHO will be last in this thread???? Who will it be? And when will we know? The suspense is mounting... - LH …………………………………………………………………………………………. Other than that… Another sonnet: Sonnet 06/04/06 MLIV Will dawn follow this darkness? Will I find Another muse to offer smile or dream? I search, but in her absence hope is blind: There is not light enough for tears to gleam. Stars give no guidance: I can see no spark, Nor beacon fire to show my heart the way. I do not know if caring has left mark Upon me, that I cannot desires say. What can I do, to inspiration hold? Where can I find a future? Will hope give Some chance to fulfill dream? Is wish too bold, That I should never let such longings live? Far better to have cared for muse now lost, Than not know love, no matter what the cost. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: GUEST,Musket Date: 06 Feb 14 - 01:19 PM There was a young man of high station Found by a pious relation Making love on a ditch To I won't say a bitch But a woman of no reputation Always been worried by that one. Where I come from having a reputation would describe the young lady. No need for comments |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 06 Feb 14 - 01:31 PM So, you want another sonnet? Sonnet 04/04/06 MLIII In time, tears will not form when I recall Our conversations, and your words. You gave Far more than I had earned: Could I not fall For one whose inspiration still dreams save? I cannot regret my concern: I hold Your smile as precious. Still, perhaps I sought Beyond hope's bound. I have only heart told: I just return the love that you have taught. Yet, should desire to hold you in my arms Be such a crime, that dreams and hope must die? What part of loving muse is it that harms One I wish only well? Can hope not try? I will not ask for more than that you tell If you are loved, and all still remains well. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 06 Feb 14 - 01:34 PM Musket I would have thought the last line of your poem ( not a sonnet, but not bad) should have been: "But a woman of low reputation ." |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: MGM·Lion Date: 07 Feb 14 - 06:26 AM Sure, but isn't he The Limerick Rake, just ——— ♫♫ ~a young fellow that's easy and bold~ ♩♩ begorrah & bedad ···· ~M~ I know I said I'd gone away but you didn't really believe me did you |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 07 Feb 14 - 07:48 AM I have no problems with other forms of verse- I just don't want people calling them sonnets. By calling something a sonnet, the poet is stating that he is writing to meet a specific set of rules, and working within those rules. The term "ode" is also misused, but less rigorously defined. I won't call a violin a piano ( both have strings) , so why should I accept calling a limerick a sonnet just because both are structured forms of verse? But another sonnet… Sonnet 04/04/06 MLII Can heart find rest after hearing its muse, While knowing she is gone? Can dream return, Without her words? Does hope for smile excuse Not taking chance to her desires learn? Are echoes now enough to ease the pain That losing muse has left? She was the light To give dreams life: How can heart hope to gain Vision to hold to soul, and sorrows fight? Will there be chance to longings for her hold, Or must desires remain ever ignored? Is there no hope that words have feelings told, And no future where past might be restored? All future heart might feel, and those dreams see, Will not replace that hope she once gave me. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 07 Feb 14 - 08:35 AM Another sonnet variant… ( As long as it is distinguished from the "standard" sonnet) "Poetic Form; Caudate Sonnet The Sonnet, with so many variations, is probably one of the most famous and well-known poetry forms out there. The term Sonnet comes from and the Italian word "sonetto" and the Occitan word "sonet" which both mean "little song". Throughout all it's variations, a Sonnet is generally thought of as; -A poem written in fourteen lines. -Follows a strict rhyme scheme. -Has a specific structure. -Written in meter(usually iambic pentameter*). -Often has a Volta.** *Iambic Pentameter- Ten syllable lines with alternating stresses, beginning on an unstressed syllable, followed by a stressed syllable, than another stressed syllable, etc..and having five stresses total). If x =unstressed and / = stressed, this is what a ten syllable iambic line would generally look like(though variations ending on an unstressed syllable do exist.); x/x/x/x/ **Volta- A Volta is a point in a poetic work where the direction of the poem changes. It could mean a shift in thoughts or the shifting point in a piece where first part of the poem is a question and the second has the answer. Any shift in thought would be considered a Volta. The Volta is most commonly used when talking about Sonnets and often occurs in a specific point in the Sonnet, depending on which Sonnet form is used. Now, some would say that the Sonnet Variation I'm going to discuss isn't really a Sonnet because it doesn't contain fourteen lines. However, it is a variation on an the very well-known Italian Sonnet and does contain the Volta and is written in iambic pentameter. Regardless of whether or not you consider the Caudate Sonnet a true Sonnet, it is a very interesting form and as it is one of my favorites, I feel it is very enjoyable to write. The creation of the Caudate Sonnet, which is also known as the Caudated Sonnet and the Tailed Sonnet is credited to Francesco Berni. The form is written in iambic pentameter and has a total of twenty lines, with a Volta at line eight. It actually begins with the complete Italian Sonnet, followed by a Coda***, a Heroic Couplet****, another Coda, and finally a Heroic Couplet. ***Coda- The term "Coda" is from the Latin term "cauda", which means "tail". It generally occurs near the end of a piece and is shorter than the other lines in that work. In the case of the Caudate Sonnet; the Coda is a line written in three metric feet. Since the poem is written in iambic pentameter, one metrical foot is two syllables, an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable; x/. So, each Coda in the Caudate Sonnet is a line written in iambic trimeter, which gives it a total of six syllables. The stresses generally look like this; x/x/x/. ****Heroic Couplet- A Heroic Couplet is a two line, rhyming stanza written in Iambic Pentameter, where each line always has a masculine ending(ends on a stressed syllable). Using the variation on iambic structure to allow you to end on an unstressed syllable is NOT an option in a Heroic Couplet." From AllPoetry.com |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: MGM·Lion Date: 07 Feb 14 - 09:18 AM But, come on, Bruce; aren't you going to write one about my Easter Bonnet? You promised! |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 07 Feb 14 - 11:18 AM Not I! That was some other handsome devil, in a movie. Sonnet 30/03/06 To a Waitress at Franklin's MLI I envy now your jacket, holding tight Round curves to dream about: Can words relate How you hold eyes, and thought? Can I words state To tell I find you beautiful, tonight? Is there reason I should not enjoy sight Of your sweet smile? I do not ask for more Though I might dream: To your soft curves ignore Is beyond all that could ever be right. You would arouse desire in any man: I would be fool to not stare and enjoy All that I see, or pretend otherwise. You need not try to longing for you fan. Just presence is enough: A glance from eyes, And you have power to dreams heal or destroy. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 07 Feb 14 - 03:40 PM by Irving Berlin Never saw you look quite so pretty before Never saw you dress quite so handsome - what's more I could hardly wait to keep our date This lovely Easter morning And my heart beat fast as I came through the door For... In your Easter bonnet, with all the frills upon it You'll be the grandest fella in the Easter parade. I'll be all in clover, and when they look us over We'll be the proudest couple in the Easter parade. On the avenue, Fifth Avenue, The photographers will snap us And you'll find that you're in the rotogravure. Oh, I could write a sonnet, about your Easter bonnet And of the guy I'm taking to the Easter Parade. On the avenue, Fifth Avenue, The photographers will snap us And you'll find that you're in the rotogravure. Oh, I could write a sonnet About your Easter bonnet And of the girl I'm taking to the Easter Parade. Note that it is NOT a sonnet. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 07 Feb 14 - 03:44 PM Both Bing AND Judy sang the song. This is Judy's script, with Bing in the last stanza. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: MGM·Lion Date: 07 Feb 14 - 05:49 PM Yes, thank you. I was perfectly well aware of the source. But, while you're about it, I still think you might oblige with a sonnet to my bonnet, Bruce, you old meanie [even if just maybe it does look more like a baseball cap]. I mean, a gifted sonneteer like you can surely come up with one for such an occasion... |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 10 Feb 14 - 09:39 AM Sorry. Not many sonnets since I lost my muse… Sonnet 23/03/06 ML A clouded moon in western sky, and chill Harsh winds show me the dream heart will acquire Without a muse: All of present hopes will Fade, and soul can only of cold night tire. Silence fills dream, and night is cold, without Thought of her within arms: How can I sleep, When heart cannot rest? Must all be in doubt, That I cannot even my past dreams keep? All that I have are muse's gift, those lines That hold moments of dream. Are they to fade From page, or might those words remain, as signs I once had one who gave my verses aid? How can I not be sad, to know I've lost This muse, and fear that will all of dreams cost? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: MGM·Lion Date: 11 Feb 14 - 04:34 AM B O O !!!!! ////// 〠 |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 11 Feb 14 - 08:39 AM Boo who? Another sonnet… Sonnet 13/03/06 MXLIX I cannot sleep, for fear that I might dream About a muse beyond all reach: I weep, To know no hope I might past hopes redeem. How can I even echo of dream keep? I cannot stop thinking about her: She Remains focus, unseen, of my desires. My dreams are blind, without her: Heart can see No hope nor dream without light muse inspires. I cannot reach my arms to her, to hold The one who holds my heart. For all I long To longing hide, arms still ache to enfold. Must I think that to find this muse was wrong? I cannot forget, nor not care about My muse: Yet, heart must this muse live without. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: MGM·Lion Date: 11 Feb 14 - 11:30 AM Y, BOO 2U of course. ~M~ |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 11 Feb 14 - 11:45 AM you seem to be twittering away your life… another sonnet… Sonnet 07/03/06 MXLVIII Bright moon, shine upon muse and show her all That might her joy increase. Can you muse teach To gift world with her smile? Yet, dare dream fall Back to desire for one beyond all reach? I do not hear her, now, nor can I feel Her thoughts, or dreams: How can I think to know Her heart's desire, when silence from nights steal All hopes from soul, that no future might grow? I wait, for muse or sleep, but neither find, And night brings heart no dream nor rest. How long Must hope be beyond reach? Must I be blind To all that muse does not share in her song? I thank my muse for all that she has shared: Yet, must I think it best if I'd not cared? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 11 Feb 14 - 11:58 AM And something that I love- whether one reads it as a poem, or as a song… Her Bright Smile Haunts Me Still by W.T. Wrighton, in Heart Songs 'Tis years since last we met, And we may not meet again. I have struggled to forget But the struggle was in vain. For her voice lives on the breeze, And her spirit comes at will, In the midnight on the seas, Her bright smile haunts me still. For her voice lives on the breeze And her spirit comes at will. In the midnight on the seas Her bright smile haunts me still. At the first sweet dawn of light, When I gaze upon the deep, Her form still greets my sight While the stars their vigils keep. When I close mine aching eyes, Sweet dreams my senses fill, And from sleep when I arise Her bright smile haunts me still. When I close mine aching eyes, Sweet dreams my senses fill, And from sleep when I arise Her bright smile haunts me still. I have sailed 'neath alien skies, I have trod the desert path, I have seen the storm arise Like a giant in his wrath. Every danger I have known That a reckless life can fill, Yet her presence is not flown, Her bright smile haunts me still. Every danger I have known That a reckless life can fill, Yet her presence is not flown, Her bright smile haunts me still. Not a sonnet, but worthy of being brought out as often as possible. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 11 Feb 14 - 12:08 PM another sonnet… Sonnet 24/02/06 MXLVII Does desire for muse give dream chance to know What heart truly requires, or does it find Only reflections of the past? To show The future: Would that vision filled my mind. I miss my muse: How can I feelings tell Without those whispers in the night? I wait, But only silence share. I've lost the spell Muse cast with smile: Are all dreams now too late? Yet, that she is happy should ease concern And regrets fade with each thought of smile. All That I long to hold her, should hopes return, Does not lessen joy that she found love's call. Should I ask for a heart, when I desire Only that she send voice to dreams inspire? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 11 Feb 14 - 12:10 PM And post 3223! Sonnet 07/02/06 MXLVI Can dream of dream share enough with my soul To ease my longings? Can hope give mind rest At end of day, when dreams wake to control All but themselves? Can my heart stand this test? In all of past I cannot seem to find The reason arms ache with the dream of you. Yet, should I to absence remain resigned, When dreams offer your eyes, and smile, anew? Can cold reality offer me more Than echoes of these dreams of muse provide? Can dream any of hope to heart restore, Or will heart learn to in itself abide? Have I even a chance in dreams to hold To one who all of my dreams of hope mold? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Musket Date: 12 Feb 14 - 07:57 AM I wandered lonely as a cloud, That floats on high, Along trees and river banks. I trod upon a bloke's bare arse, And heard a women's voice say "Thanks." |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 12 Feb 14 - 09:16 AM any chance you might want to try something with rhyme and meter? Another sonnet… Sonnet 26/01/06 MXLV Have I reason to think you might be more Than just beautiful woman? Will you share Some of dreams' light, and with smile hopes restore? Can I dream that there might be chance you'd care? What can I do to earn a smile or give Soft laughter cause? It seems that eyes can say As much as all my words: Must longing live Upon just glance? Has hope led heart astray? Might I ask evening to explore your mind? Would starlight guide our conversation? All I ask is that we have a chance to find If you are one that might my verses call. Can I try to within my arms enfold A vision that dreams upon page have told? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Musket Date: 12 Feb 14 - 01:09 PM Rhyme and meter? I'm typing poetry, not lyrics! Hillsborough, 26 December 1979 Sheffield Wednesday 4.0 Sheffield Utd Hark now hear! The Wednesday sing! United ran away! And we will fight for ever more Because of Boxing Day! Now THAT'S poetry..... If Irving Berlin had written it, it wouldn't be a sonnet either. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 12 Feb 14 - 01:11 PM But this IS a sonnet: Sonnet 24/01/06 MXLIV Are you then muse, that I might find a rhyme Reflected in your eyes? Know you the spell To hold to dreams, and heart? Can you stop time With power of just smile? Might you hopes tell? I look at you, and wonder how to know If you are what I seek: To dream, the light Upon desire; To heart, reason to show Longings to hold and be held throughout night. Yet, do dreams matter? My thoughts do not bind More than my own desires: You remain free. I search, but do not know if what I find Is just a dream, or vision of "to be". I have no better means than to be bold, And ask if you would want to my heart hold. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 14 Feb 14 - 11:42 AM Happy Valentine's Day, all… Sonnet 24/01/06 MXLIII How can I balance longing with desire To know my muse is happy? Is there chance She might her lines resume, or does she tire? Will she for my verse spare even a glance? Wanting her smile, perhaps I should not tell Of hopes, or my desires. Yet, she is muse, The reason for verse: With her, all is well; Without, dreams only heart and soul confuse. Can I think about her, and not muse seek? Not under stars, or moon, or sun: She holds The power to dream of life to soul speak, Yet, it cannot be muse that dream enfolds. She is heart's hope, and dream's desire, but all That I now hold cannot her smile recall. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 28 Nov 17 - 10:38 AM "Sonnets to My Muse" https://www.xlibris.com/Bookstore/BookDetail.aspx?BookId=SKU-000765381 Already available discounted on-line. Bruce |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 28 Nov 17 - 11:22 AM I have been last for 1383 days. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Janie Date: 28 Nov 17 - 12:20 PM Not anymore :>) |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 28 Nov 17 - 12:30 PM 1383 days vs 1.3 hours... |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 28 Nov 17 - 12:40 PM And of course, another sonnet: Sonnet 1/11/17 MXCV How can I friendship show, to one I care For more than I have earned? She remains muse, Yet I cannot now hear her dreams, nor share More than concern: Of what she might refuse I dare not seek. If I might bright smile win, I would be satisfied to only hold Past memories: Not dreams, as I would spin Imagined touch into hopes far too bold. I wish her only well, and that the night Might remain sorrow-free, and days be spent Without regret. Yet, have I still the right To verses weave, much less that words be sent? A decade does not alter my desire, And dream of muse will still my verse inspire. 8-(E |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 18 May 18 - 11:34 AM And another sonnet- 85th to my reluctant muse. Sonnet 16/05/18 MCLXV How can I write words worth a muse’s smile, When I’ve not seen her for some time? I fear That I repeat these lines, without muse near To guide verse on. Can I hope to find new Image in darkness? Without light as true As I see in her eyes, how will I show What muse means to my heart, or let muse know That I find absence to be heart’s hope’s trial? Can vision of muse serve to show a part Of what is found in eyes: A light so pure That verse is formed in mind? I must verse write Of hopes and dream, but will words in my heart Find path to page, without light to insure The way? Can soul speak, with muse out of sight? "Sonnets to My Muse" the first 293 to my Forever Muse, Rebecca. ( Clicky fixed from earlier post) https://www.xlibris.com/Bookstore/BookDetail.aspx?Book=546662 |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Donuel Date: 18 May 18 - 11:44 AM The earliest known records of the Nine Muses are from Boeotia, the homeland of Hesiod. Some ancient authorities thought that the Nine Muses were of Thracian origin.[5] There, a tradition persisted that the Muses had once been three in number.[6] In the first century BC, Diodorus Siculus quotes Hesiod to the contrary, observing: Writers similarly disagree also concerning the number of the Muses; for some say that there are three, and others that there are nine, but the number nine has prevailed since it rests upon the authority of the most distinguished men, such as Homer and Hesiod and others like them.[7] Diodorus also states (Book I.18) that Osiris first recruited the nine Muses, along with the Satyrs, while passing through Ethiopia, before embarking on a tour of all Asia and Europe, teaching the arts of cultivation wherever he went. According to Hesiod's account (c. 600 BC), generally followed by the writers of antiquity, the Nine Muses were the nine daughters of Zeus and Mnemosyne (i. e. "Memory" personified), figuring as personifications of knowledge and the arts, especially literature, dance and music. The Roman scholar Varro (116–27 BC) relates that there are only three Muses: one born from the movement of water, another who makes sound by striking the air, and a third who is embodied only in the human voice. They were called Melete or "Practice", Mneme or "Memory" and Aoide or "Song". Three ancient Muses were also reported in Plutarch's (46–120 AD) Quaestiones Convivales[8] (9.I4.2–4).[9] However, the classical understanding of the Muses tripled their triad and established a set of nine goddesses, who embody the arts and inspire creation with their graces through remembered and improvised song and mime, writing, traditional music, and dance. It was not until Hellenistic times that the following systematic set of functions was assigned to them, and even then there was some variation in both their names and their attributes: Calliope (epic poetry), Clio (history), Euterpe (flutes and lyric poetry), Thalia (comedy and pastoral poetry), Melpomene (tragedy), Terpsichore (dance), Erato (love poetry), Polyhymnia (sacred poetry), Urania (astronomy). The nine Muses on a Roman sarcophagus (second century AD)—Louvre, Paris According to Pausanias in the later second century AD,[10] there were originally three Muses, worshipped on Mount Helicon in Boeotia: Aoid? ("song" or "tune"), Meléte ("practice" or "occasion"), and Mn?me ("memory"). Together, these three form the complete picture of the preconditions of poetic art in cult practice. In Delphi three Muses were worshiped as well, but with other names: N?te, Mése, and Hýpate, which are assigned as the names of the three cords of the ancient musical instrument, the lyre. Alternatively, later they were called Kephis?, Apollonís, and Borysthenís, which names characterize them as daughters of Apollo. In a later tradition, a set of four Muses were recognized: Thelxinóe, Aoid? Arche, and Meléte, said to be daughters of Zeus and Plusia or of Ouranos. One of the people frequently associated with the Muses was Pierus. By some he was called the father (by a Pimpleian nymph, called Antiope by Cicero) of a total of seven Muses, called Neil? (?e???), Trit?ne (???t???), Asop? (?s?p?), Heptápora (?pt?p??a), Acheloís, Tipopl? (??p?p??), and Rhodía (??d?a). |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 18 May 18 - 11:49 AM Euterpe (flutes and lyric poetry) Erato (love poetry) Polyhymnia (sacred poetry) Are my Muses, Star, Kelly, Katie, Rebecca, and Sara have been my muses. 84th sonnet to Sara Sonnet 14/05/18 MCLXIV I do not worship muse, but I will pray That Heaven shares her time. I would be blessed To see her smile. I have heart’s hope confessed, But do not demand that she meet desire: To view her eyes will always verse inspire. Yet, will it remain for forever wrong To dream of muse, and for her kisses long? Must I at such a distance always stay? I am held by the light of muse’s eyes, Touching her only with words. I may yearn For more, but cannot muse’s wish defy. I hope verse might to muse’s level rise. That I would something new of Heaven learn. I know only I cannot muse deny. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 18 May 18 - 11:51 AM From 1327 to 1368, Petrarch wrote 366 poems as part of a sequence, centered on the theme of his love for Laura. The sequence—collected in a canzoniere or song-book, usually called Rime Sparse, or Scattered Rhymes in English—includes 317 sonnets, a form based on rules established by the 13th-century Italian poet Guittone of Arezzo. The earliest major practitioner of the sonnet, Petrarch is credited with the development and popularization of the Italian sonnet, thus called the Petrarchan sonnet. About Petrarch’s legacy, the poet J. D. McClatchy has said, “True love—or rather, the truest—is always obsessive and unrequited. No one has better dramatized how it scorches the heart and fires the imagination than Petrarch did, centuries ago. He dipped his pen in tears and wrote the poems that have shaped our sense of love—its extremes of longing and loss—ever since.” |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 18 May 18 - 11:52 AM I can post my Sonnet Redouble to Sara, if anyone replies to this thread. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 18 May 18 - 11:53 AM (see post of Date: 14 May 04 - 12:02 PM for my previous Sonnet Redouble) |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Donuel Date: 18 May 18 - 04:29 PM a redoubled sara muse? / |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 18 May 18 - 04:50 PM A sonnet redouble-a sequence of 14 sonnets in a corona, followed by a15th sonnet consisting of the first lines of each of the sonnets in order. Didn’t I explain this for the first one? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 21 May 18 - 10:42 AM Sonnet Redouble 2: To My Reluctant Muse Sonnets MCXLI through MCLV Arms ache with longing to my muse enfold, But Heaven remains beyond reach of heart: How can I to reluctant muse impart All that she gives? Words alone do not tell What in her eyes and smile become the spell To fill my mind with verse. She brings a light To shadowed dream, to make my work seem right, That I might hope I have my passions told. How will I repay muse who is the source Of vision, and of dream? I cannot give, In all my verses, words enough to show How much she means to me: Heart holds to course At her guidance. I must let longings live, For all I know she does not wish it so. For all I know she does not wish it so, I will acknowledge debt I owe my muse. Without her light as guide, dream would refuse To show me what to write, and how to share Thought of my heart’s desire: That I might care As much as muse allows. She holds the key To inspiration in her smile to me: How can I keep from letting longings grow? She gives me reason to heart’s feelings write, In dream of her warm eyes, and sight of smile So sweet, to encourage my passions’ flow. I long to hold muse always in my sight, But know to not unasked of hopes make trial: How can I let her my heart’s desires know? How can I let her my heart’s desires know When I cannot my muse’s dream recall? Should she inform my heart, that would be all I need: I would then try to dream fulfil, If I might, and have cause to think she will Accept my offering of heart’s caring. Not knowing dream, I’ll but send words bearing My hope to see more of her eyes’ bright glow. If I might future find in dreams inspired By thought of muse, would I then know the way For verse to take to win to goal, or lose All that I seek offending muse? So mired In questions, I dare not heart’s desires say Without giving cause that she would refuse. Without giving cause that she would refuse I try to tell muse how I value smile, But do not know the words I may write: While I dare not say too much, it would be sin To say too little. In sight I begin To find my inspiration. Can I send Enough to tell, but not sweet muse offend? Would I win attention if words amuse? I long to find perfect word, to describe The curve of muse’s lips, that smiles create. Yet, I am satisfied to recall views And dream I might of heaven’s kiss imbibe. Should I my own heart’s desire now relate, To share her smile, or let dream of her choose? To share her smile, or let dream of her choose The future path of all endeavors seems To be all I might dare: I have no schemes That will win more than asked. Must I recall Unfounded dream, when I know dream is all That I might hold at night? Should I dream let Control imagination, sleep upset, And from verse hide all of my muse’s views? In muse I seek to focus of art find, That I might hold to a fixed path that ties Dreams and desires into verse that defines My soul. Apart from muse, I remain blind: Without her smile, and the light from her eyes, What can inspire all of my future lines? What can inspire all of my future lines When I so rarely at my muse may look, To see her eyes and smile? Yet, in what book Have I found promise that my dreams will be? I’ve only faith and hope muse might agree To guide my words, and lend heart’s passions voice. I dare not falter: I have only choice To pray muse gives power that verse refines. In muse I find reason to care: The gem Of bright eyes that let light into my soul. Yet, should I look in my dreams for the signs Of hope? Does not seeing my muse condemn Heart to darkness, and verse from reaching goal? Must I abandon hope that her light shines? Must I abandon hope that her light shines Upon the dreams that give me verse? I fear The darkness absence brings: How might I steer A path to muse’s presence? Dare I ask To spend time with my muse, or is that task I cannot on her place? Must heart defend The need for conversation? I intend Only to learn what hopes now muse defines. Without some dream of muse, heart is as blind, Not seeing soul, and falling to despair. Should I have concern caring is too bold, That I must longings keep only in mind? Might I ask for my muse to sweet smile share, To give reason to any verses mold? To give reason to any verses mold Requires a muse. To form more than just dream, There must be light from higher realm, a beam To fill the mind. So few provide the spark That fires the soul and lifts heart from the dark: Might I hold to this one, now found, to keep The inspiration? Would she have me weep, That passion’s heat condemns heart to be cold? I wait, hoping to spend a future hour With one who causes verse. I must head bow In silent prayer that heart might fears retire. Can I hope that muse will let my dreams flower To vision of her smile, or tell me how Am I to hold as hidden heart’s desire? Am I to hold as hidden heart’s desire To muse repay for gift? Can I not thank The one who fills my verse? Mind would be blank Without sight of her eyes: Her smiles restore Heart’s dream to life. Should I not beg, implore, And plead, for all that muse might share? I prize Seeing my muse: Perhaps it is not wise, But I care for one who holds heart entire. Yet, should I write of longings, when I know I do not hold my muse’s heart? I try To dream of only smile, but heart might sin When muse is beautiful. When verses flow, I can but hope I might on words rely, That I might offer cause for smile, or grin. That I might offer cause for smile, or grin, To give me muse’s grace, would be my wish. I must hope I can with verse accomplish Intent: To dream of muse hold on the page, And keep a part of muse as mine. My stage Is fourteen lines, and muse provides the wing To lift words from paper, letting verse sing. I fear I must all of hopes on muse pin. How can I know what words muse will allow, Until words I share? Can I hold dream, while Reaching to muse? Dare I let desires toy With what muse provides me? Do I break vow To not of muse ask? Only with her smile Can I know what to write, to lines employ. Can I know what to write, to lines employ In reaching muse? Dare I reveal that part Of soul is bound? Desires may my dreams start, But it is smile that offers verses life. How am I to find peace, out of this strife, Without my muse’s blessing? Will she share The light of eyes, bringing glow to her hair? Can I see heaven and not lust destroy? It seems muse has from heaven brought a charm And beauty to guide mortal fools who’ve earned The pleasure of her smile. Might she inspire Enough to make verse worthy? Does hope harm The chance of smile? Can heart remain unburned In seeking to in muse’s eyes see fire? In seeking to in muse’s eyes see fire, To light dreams and warm heart, I find I fall Into my own desires: I dare not call My longings more than hope. She has made clear I should not think that I might hold her ear. Yet, can I less than care? She is the one I will call muse: Would I gratitude shun, To not give thanks she does not of verse tire? In muse I see one who shares Heaven’s light And I will pray, to have the chance to get Such sacred blessings: I would my hopes spin This verse to fabric of a worth, that might Repay my muse for her gift, in soul set To forge in mind words that might her smile win. To forge in mind words that might her smile win Requires true passion’s flame, and words refined By higher power. The dreams one has in mind Are but the ore: One must from them burn dross That holds the soul to earth. From dream I’ll toss All parts that are not holy, that I might Hold to the prayer that muse will keep hopes bright. The line between longing and lust is thin. All I can do is try my best, to hold To muse’s gift: She gives with smile the source For Poetry. I hope not to annoy, But I wish I might know if muse might fold Her wings, and listen to my verse: Of course I long to know how to bring my muse joy. I long to know how to bring my muse joy That I might see her smile, and take delight In showing that the words I choose are right. I hope to give her pleasure that I find Such inspiration, yet must be resigned To holding only in my dreams. Muse is grail, To give verse desired power: I must veil Any dream that would muse’s gift destroy. I value muse for all she is, the cause Of verse. For lines to vex I would regret: My muse’s smile is worth far more than gold. I do not know how to my desires pause, With such a maid. She is an angel, yet Arms ache with longing to my muse enfold. Arms ache with longing to my muse enfold, For all I know she does not wish it so. How can I let her my heart’s desires know, Without giving cause that she would refuse To share her smile, or let dream of her choose What can inspire all of my future lines? Must I abandon hope that her light shines To give reason to any verses mold? Am I to hold as hidden heart’s desire That I might offer cause for smile, or grin? Can I know what to write, to lines employ In seeking to in muse’s eyes see fire To forge in mind words that might her smile win? I long to know how to bring my muse joy. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 21 May 18 - 10:45 AM OOOOPPSS! ".... Into my own desires: I dare not call My longings more than hope. She has made clear I should not think that I might hold her near ^^^^^^ Yet, can I less than care? She is the one ...." |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: Donuel Date: 21 May 18 - 11:04 AM I have seen how various photos of ladies with lovely actions and physical charms nicely graces sonnets like these and connects with an audience on a deeper level. It publishes well, particularly in tis climate. think about it |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 21 May 18 - 11:10 AM As in the book of poems to Lara in "Dr Zhivago" I include a picture of my muse at the beginning of the book. |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 22 May 18 - 09:09 AM 86th sonnet to my reluctant muse... Sonnet 19/05/18 MCLXVI Clouds hide the moon, but if muse is present The night would still be bright. From Heaven shims The glow to dream illuminate: It finds Words from my heart to place on page, that tell Of feelings for one I wish only well. Might I hope that, someday, my verse might speak To muse’s heart? That I find her unique Should not be reason to these dreams resent. Rain gives no tears: I would only regret If muse wanted the sun. To give her all That might bring muse’s smile: That is my goal. Yet, does my longing to please muse upset, That I should not try to earn smile? Recall Her smile gives verse: How else can I be whole? |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 22 May 18 - 09:48 AM typos ..... From Heaven shines |
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last! From: beardedbruce Date: 25 May 18 - 12:36 PM 87th sonnet to my muse... Sonnet 24/05/18 MCLXVII Muse might mean more to me than she desires, But I cannot choose to not hope for all That dream may share. I can limits recall, Yet heart finds cause to think of muse as one Who has a brighter light in eyes than sun Shines down on me. How can heart keep away From longing to forever with muse stay, Or not to dream of one who gives verse fires? Should I from all of dreams my heart recuse, That I might less than love? Would I succeed? I do not think I’ve chance to angel hold, But care too much for one I find is muse: How can I not want to keep what I need? Without dream of this muse, my thoughts are cold. |